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Effect 08-15-04 11:45 AM

Elevation
 
Anyways, dude in the tutorial talked a lot about flow but didn't mention a few very important aspects...


... Assonance, Consonance, and Alliteration.

Dictionary shit:

Assonance: the repetition of similar vowels in the stressed syllables of successive words.

Consonance: the repetition of consonants (or consonant patterns) especially at the ends of words.

Alliteration: use of the same consonant at the beginning of each stressed syllable in a line of verse.


And now in hip hop terms:

Assonance: make the vowel sounds in your connectiong words match up, like this...
'Anxiety ignites in a variety of lights intirely intised, admiring twice while expiring life in an empire of a dietys sight.'

Consonance: make the consonants (non-vowels) of your connecting words sound alike, something like this...
'I'll park in the streets ta scarf on ya heart piece, born a scarred preist with a mark of the dark beast.'

Alliteration: technically, vowels don't count here but who give's a shit, the flows still ill. Just match up the beginning of each word, like you've seen in some alphabet cypha's, this is easy, check it...
'I'm an assasin asaulting ambitions and asperations, born brawn, blazin' bazooka bombs n blood bathin.'


All this extra shit can help your flow become so ill, Shakespeare's ass mastered all this long ago... its all based in poetry, but you can trust that it won't hurt your battles or writtens. More examples...

'intinsify initial insight, illiterate i's(eyes) incased
easily escaping earth, extreme elevation embrassed'

'anxiety ignites in a variety of lights intirely intised, admiring twice while expiring life in an empire of a dietys sight'

...and just an example of perfect fucking flow:

'My life as a misanthropic dominatrix mental patient, hearts vented satan, content's breakin' simple basics.'

...and this shit mixed with those multies:

'Suplexin shadows severin several sides n sections, terminating testicles n teats wit tentacles every time i'm textin.'

... and alphabetical alliteration again:

'mass massacaers a master of murdering menators
a necromancer navigating narcotics n-the-north
an obscene omen birthing ominous offspring
proper presperation prevents poor performance'

Now learn this if ya don't know it... and practice then preach this shit.

And just to give credit, i IM'ed Manic for these quick examples. Peace.

I found this infomation by another site can anyone give me some assonance examples to help me with my flow in bars and can I get to know if perfect rhyme is the better than assonance and also how to do assonance. Just need straight elevation... word.

2~pacalypse 08-15-04 11:47 AM

Can you sum this up in a nice SMALL sentence?

Effect 08-15-04 11:52 AM

It tells you at the bottom I want to know if there are basically any rules to rhyming and I need to know how to rhyme well to show my full potentual. So I need to know how to do assonance with bigger words and single, then after and know the difference between perfect and them. I am a bit confuzed about it just need straight help on this one. Peace

Adam 08-15-04 12:05 PM

check the example you wrote, its perfect....

'Anxiety ignites in a variety of lights intirely intised, admiring twice while expiring life in an empire of a dietys sight.'

Effect 08-15-04 12:09 PM

I need bigger words explaining 2, 3, and 4 sylables long. Also need to know the difference between perfect because they might be to simplictic I need alot explained.

MARVOLoUsJ1009 08-15-04 12:12 PM

dogg fukk all dat extra shit just orignial with ya shit...dont try da be like em...dont just work on wun part of rap like multis do da whole thing...n if u really wanna elevate dont text it fukks up ya flow when u on a beat 4real...im about da stop dat shit but just be yaself n u'll be good n stop battlin newbie's

2~pacalypse 08-15-04 12:14 PM

I dont know if I can help but read some of my disses n frees....

Effect 08-15-04 12:18 PM

I need shit explained though like rhymes I can't not think about it cause I wanna become good. Once you know the skill you can begin to master it so I wanna do that I can be good I have potentual not being big headed.

2~pacalypse 08-15-04 12:28 PM

Go here

http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=154

Effect 08-15-04 12:32 PM

When reading the tutorials it don't work. I need to know if there are any rules in rhyming thats all and how to do differen't tyoes without it sounding shit. Whats the best way cause when I look at your bars when rapping not all of dem rhyme sometimes only sound alike but an't always the whole way through it. Just need it all making more sense to me ive tried that tutorials I need being told how to do it. peace

The Jett 08-15-04 01:06 PM

don't center your work.

there you go ;)

~Luciano~ 08-15-04 01:37 PM


yea go for more of a
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