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Jay Royal 08-26-05 12:29 PM

THE NAME vs c.ghost
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-05 at 01:29 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 08-26-05 12:30 PM

THE NAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 12:30 PM.

System 08-26-05 12:40 PM

c.ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 12:40 PM.

Jay Royal 08-26-05 12:44 PM

shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``,
don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”,
boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest,
change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels.
bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch,
its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is*

explanations :check his sig

c.ghost 08-26-05 01:05 PM

Listen,

This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame
C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name
Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons
stop n listen
C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system"
Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines
These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b the reciever to them
Now days catz cheatin to win
"The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men
Its not ur turn,not the season to win

c.ghost 08-26-05 01:07 PM

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

c.ghost 08-26-05 01:55 PM

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^

Jay Royal 08-27-05 03:09 AM

uppin............................................. ....

c.ghost 08-27-05 12:31 PM

uppin................................... .........

c.ghost 08-27-05 01:28 PM

uppppppiiiiiinnnnnn Bs^^^^^^^^^^^^^^..............^^^^^^^^

.Mystique. 08-27-05 01:48 PM

Voted For: c.ghost

The Name
shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``,
don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”,
No bad opener
boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest,
change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels.
dopesnt rhyme..Whack!
bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch,
its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is*
Whack closure

Elevate on everything. Punches multis personals metaphors an flow. Strucutre was ok.

C.Ghost

This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame
C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name
Ok opener
Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons
stop n listen
C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system"
No
Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines
These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b
the reciever to them
no
Now days catz cheatin to win
"The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men
Its not ur turn,not the season to win
ok closure

v/ ghost for harder hitting punches an multi's

Dickard. 08-27-05 02:09 PM

Voted For: c.ghost

Both had pretty basic verses.......but c.ghost was the obvious to win, his punches hit harder...

boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest,
change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels................the name man that dont even rhyme nor make sense

c.ghost ur structure was off but ur punches was medium so ur best line was

Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons
stop n listen
C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system"

kinda weak but u finished nice with a punch.............RTF

c.ghost 08-27-05 05:10 PM

uppin...........................Bs^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^

Dickard. 08-27-05 07:44 PM

bs?.......then delete it if u think it is......get at me on a topical

Way Forward 08-27-05 07:57 PM

Voted For: c.ghost

c- ghost - better structure from you, ok flow decent punches, not all hit but pretty much all did, u had some wordplay but you need to elevate on getting more in etc. use more complex vocab next time though.

name - ok punches, only a few connected. u need to use more personals and more wordplay, also more complexer vocab

v/c.ghost. reasons above.


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