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c.ghost 4 44.44%
THE NAME 5 55.56%
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Old 08-26-05, 12:29 PM   #1
Jay Royal
I'ma Royal
 
From: Oulu,FIN
THE NAME vs c.ghost

IP: 22E5 DE19

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-26-05 at 01:29 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.
 
Old 08-26-05, 12:30 PM   #2
System
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: 22E5 DE19

THE NAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 12:30 PM.
 
Old 08-26-05, 12:40 PM   #3
System
Guest
 
Posts: n/a
IP: C847 337D

c.ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 12:40 PM.
 
Old 08-26-05, 12:44 PM   #4
Jay Royal
I'ma Royal
 
From: Oulu,FIN
IP: 22E5 DE19

shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``,
don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”,
boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest,
change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels.
bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch,
its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is*

explanations :check his sig
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Old 08-26-05, 01:05 PM   #5
c.ghost
New to RV
 
From: Jerzy..South Newark
IP: C847 337D

Listen,

This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame
C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name
Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons
stop n listen
C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system"
Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines
These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b the reciever to them
Now days catz cheatin to win
"The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men
Its not ur turn,not the season to win
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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style
 
Old 08-26-05, 01:07 PM   #6
c.ghost
New to RV
 
From: Jerzy..South Newark
IP: C847 337D

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style
 
Old 08-26-05, 01:55 PM   #7
c.ghost
New to RV
 
From: Jerzy..South Newark
IP: C847 337D

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^
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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style
 
Old 08-27-05, 03:09 AM   #8
Jay Royal
I'ma Royal
 
From: Oulu,FIN
IP: 22E5 DE19

uppin............................................. ....
 
Old 08-27-05, 12:31 PM   #9
c.ghost
New to RV
 
From: Jerzy..South Newark
IP: C847 337D

uppin................................... .........
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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style
 
Old 08-27-05, 01:28 PM   #10
c.ghost
New to RV
 
From: Jerzy..South Newark
IP: C847 337D

uppppppiiiiiinnnnnn Bs^^^^^^^^^^^^^^..............^^^^^^^^
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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style
 
Old 08-27-05, 01:48 PM   #11
.Mystique.
New to RV
 
IP: 72AA 464B

Voted For: c.ghost

The Name
shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``,
don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”,
No bad opener
boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest,
change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels.
dopesnt rhyme..Whack!
bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch,
its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is*
Whack closure

Elevate on everything. Punches multis personals metaphors an flow. Strucutre was ok.

C.Ghost

This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame
C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name
Ok opener
Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons
stop n listen
C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system"
No
Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines
These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b
the reciever to them
no
Now days catz cheatin to win
"The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men
Its not ur turn,not the season to win
ok closure

v/ ghost for harder hitting punches an multi's
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Old 08-27-05, 02:09 PM   #12
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
From: Boston
IP: 0825 899A

Voted For: c.ghost

Both had pretty basic verses.......but c.ghost was the obvious to win, his punches hit harder...

boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest,
change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels................the name man that dont even rhyme nor make sense

c.ghost ur structure was off but ur punches was medium so ur best line was

Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons
stop n listen
C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system"

kinda weak but u finished nice with a punch.............RTF
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Old 08-27-05, 05:10 PM   #13
c.ghost
New to RV
 
From: Jerzy..South Newark
IP: C847 337D

uppin...........................Bs^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^
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C.ghost

Im so ghost........ghost........ghost

Tri state bandit ,50 state rebel





Get soulclapped .............e-style
 
Old 08-27-05, 07:44 PM   #14
Dickard.
A Life Of Chryme
 
From: Boston
IP: 0825 899A

bs?.......then delete it if u think it is......get at me on a topical
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Old 08-27-05, 07:57 PM   #15
Way Forward
New to RV
 
From: U.K.
IP: B1A5 868C

Voted For: c.ghost

c- ghost - better structure from you, ok flow decent punches, not all hit but pretty much all did, u had some wordplay but you need to elevate on getting more in etc. use more complex vocab next time though.

name - ok punches, only a few connected. u need to use more personals and more wordplay, also more complexer vocab

v/c.ghost. reasons above.
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