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Natural killa vs Way Forward
IP: 27C7 4FC6
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12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-29-05 at 07:42 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Closed - Expire battle win This Battle Is Now Closed
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IP: B1A5 868C
Way Forward has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 07:50 PM.
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IP: 27C7 4FC6
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 07:59 PM.
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IP: B1A5 868C
this dude thinks hes dope, hired a ghostwriter an still lacks creativity
u could 'blow up' in a nuclear powerplant, and still have no 'radio activity' hiding behind the alias of being a killa, dog please save your pride it'll be known worldwide, be prepared to loose your rep once we collide new to the site so what i lack in personals i make up with flow in spite of my 'noobie' status i wont hesitate to deflate your ego let me switch-up-my-style as i figure out if ur verse-is-worthwhile im-lyrically-versatile, words-oh-so-hostile and-incredibly-vile i'll leave ya body aligned-wit-blasts cause there's a pussy behind-that-mask alternating-contrasts of being wack and dope, im the latter and up- to- the-task of lyrically-dismantling-ur-frame and corrupting the workings-of-ur-brain have people forgettin-ur-name as i prove to all your-lyrically-lame
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 27C7 4FC6
ur hiding outta sighting cuz dickridin n bitin...they stay for herbs
this battle's like slappin a pit-bull cuz you go that way for-werds (foward)* scorch ur skeleton n leave the gashes dark-toned n ur mind disowned as for personals?..this guy's an unsolved mystery cuz he's unknown rip you from head to toe n shred this hoe n make you suck up this shotty like a grave robber raided a cemetery cuz who the fuck is this no-body? foward's an unskilled magican cuz all his shit is not worth the while/wile u shouldn't smile cuz you got as much skill as you got words in your profile hiding the facts to ur life cuz u stacked to bite from the site,don't lie u shouldn't have registered here...you ain't shit and your style's demise don't even try to step faggot,I'll merk you in text,topical,graphics,or audio lasing your toes...so don't wonder why I'm half assing this unknown hoe Str8 keyed...I ain't bothering...-_- *-when you slap a pit-bull..it bites..and is name is way-foward *-the word wile means tricks... w/e... |
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IP: 27C7 4FC6
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IP: 27C7 4FC6
uppin 4 votes.....................................
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A Life Of Chryme
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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
IP: 3240 794D
checkin pollz fam u merked this cat...............
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IP: 27C7 4FC6
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IP: ECB3 36A0
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New to RV
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IP: 72AA 464B
Voted For: Way Forward
this dude thinks hes dope, hired a ghostwriter an still lacks creativity u could 'blow up' in a nuclear powerplant, and still have no 'radio activity' hiding behind the alias of being a killa, dog please save your pride it'll be known worldwide, be prepared to loose your rep once we collide new to the site so what i lack in personals i make up with flow in spite of my 'noobie' status i wont hesitate to deflate your ego let me switch-up-my-style as i figure out if ur verse-is-worthwhile im-lyrically-versatile, words-oh-so-hostile and-incredibly-vile i'll leave ya body aligned-wit-blasts cause there's a pussy behind-that-mask alternating-contrasts of being wack and dope, im the latter and up- to- the-task of lyrically-dismantling-ur-frame and corrupting the workings-of-ur-brain have people forgettin-ur-name as i prove to all your-lyrically-lame vs ur hiding outta sighting cuz dickridin n bitin...they stay for herbs this battle's like slappin a pit-bull cuz you go that way for-werds (foward)* scorch ur skeleton n leave the gashes dark-toned n ur mind disowned as for personals?..this guy's an unsolved mystery cuz he's unknown rip you from head to toe n shred this hoe n make you suck up this shotty like a grave robber raided a cemetery cuz who the fuck is this no-body? foward's an unskilled magican cuz all his shit is not worth the while/wile u shouldn't smile cuz you got as much skill as you got words in your profile hiding the facts to ur life cuz u stacked to bite from the site,don't lie u shouldn't have registered here...you ain't shit and your style's demise don't even try to step faggot,I'll merk you in text,topical,graphics,or audio lasing your toes...so don't wonder why I'm half assing this unknown hoe way forward- Multis metaphors an punches were on lock. Good overall verse. You did your best at personals but it cool though cuz you are also new. 8/10 killa- Nice verse. Hard hitting an good with personals. I didnt see as manyt good multis as way had. you had personals though an i liked that. Use more metaphors. BreakDown: punches: Tie personals: Killa flow: Tie Strucutre: Tie complexity- Tie multis: Forward creativity:tie Wordplay- Forward v/ forward for wordplay because punches from both apponenets were good an forward out did him on wordplay.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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IP: ECB3 36A0
uppin.......................................
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 1C3A 605C
uppin for votes...................................
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IP: ECB3 36A0
uppin for votes.. come on
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T&T
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This was feedback posted for Way Forward
IP: CF2D A5A6
man..you self glorify too fukin much..............
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