THE NAME vs c.ghost
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-26-05 at 01:29 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
THE NAME has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 12:30 PM.
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c.ghost has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-05 12:40 PM.
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shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``,
don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”, boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest, change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels. bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch, its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is* explanations :check his sig |
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This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons stop n listen C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system" Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b the reciever to them Now days catz cheatin to win "The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men Its not ur turn,not the season to win |
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Voted For: c.ghost
The Name shit boy s wack, try to hit me with punches of `` knives for throw ``, don’t scare nigga cause ur lines already looks like uv seen “a ghost”, No bad opener boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest, change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels. dopesnt rhyme..Whack! bitch use “the name” play with me, shit that’s old bitch, its more than old, rotten shit like ur lines and name is* Whack closure Elevate on everything. Punches multis personals metaphors an flow. Strucutre was ok. C.Ghost This cat cant b seriuos, im bout ta rock this lame C.ghost ripped his whole meaning of rap maybe thas why he got no name Ok opener Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons stop n listen C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system" No Im lyricly inclined,i rip ryhmes,to go against ya shit lines These 44's a come afta ya like Mike vick passes, u ka b the reciever to them no Now days catz cheatin to win "The name" aint ready 4 war, he retreatin his men Its not ur turn,not the season to win ok closure v/ ghost for harder hitting punches an multi's |
Voted For: c.ghost
Both had pretty basic verses.......but c.ghost was the obvious to win, his punches hit harder... boy get his sould clapped like pulled hearth off your chest, change ur E-style to L-style cause that’s how 50 states rebels................the name man that dont even rhyme nor make sense c.ghost ur structure was off but ur punches was medium so ur best line was Blow past these niggaz like bulls n pistons stop n listen C.ghost give a new nigga 0-1, like he tryin to copy the "system" kinda weak but u finished nice with a punch.............RTF |
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Voted For: c.ghost
c- ghost - better structure from you, ok flow decent punches, not all hit but pretty much all did, u had some wordplay but you need to elevate on getting more in etc. use more complex vocab next time though. name - ok punches, only a few connected. u need to use more personals and more wordplay, also more complexer vocab v/c.ghost. reasons above. |
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