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Magic5 01-16-06 07:23 PM

33. Haiku Sylabis vs. 34. NeFisTo
 


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NeFisTo 01-16-06 09:59 PM

Check'n In.....

G.Hod 01-18-06 01:42 PM

Wordizzle.... in

NeFisTo 01-19-06 07:56 PM

Five Seven Five Syllubis is Sticken to that Seventeen..
With Anerexic Punches..
Hes Like Mary Kate How he comes Light+cant Compare-To-Me..

NeFisTo 01-19-06 07:56 PM

Haiku=a poem of 17 syllables,first line being 5 second 7 then 5 so yeah =x

G.Hod 01-20-06 12:15 PM

Don't sway haiku :nono:

G.Hod 01-20-06 12:16 PM

Kids a fake rip off of nebisco cookies.... ya see...
Psa Dynasty?
Death by me is the only way you could die-nasty

meh lame but vote up anyways folks

ksr 01-20-06 12:24 PM

weak battle....
v/nefisto cuz die-nasty is played like fuck
shoulda followed up on the nebisco setup....

NeFisTo 01-20-06 06:25 PM

No swaying Nefisto :nono:

noname 01-20-06 07:24 PM

Five Seven Five Syllubis is Sticken to that Seventeen..
With Anerexic Punches..
Hes Like Mary Kate How he comes Light+cant Compare-To-Me..

^^-1st line didn't work,a failed attempt at a nameplay there.
And the 2nd line was stretched out.
Punch could have been really dope...if worded better and more direct.
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Kids a fake rip off of nebisco cookies.... ya see...
Psa Dynasty?
Death by me is the only way you could die-nasty

^^-Die-nasty?..That wordplay is played.I used it last year in the summer.And even then,dudes told me it was played.Sorry.
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Vote=Nefisto

Stanza. 01-20-06 08:37 PM

//////////////.............................v/ Niefiesto

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KOOL COL-B 01-20-06 09:17 PM

v/Nefisto

die-nasty iz played az fuck, n i usually dont mind shit if its played, but dayum that shit iz played, lol, werd

GKillaz05 01-21-06 11:30 AM

Vote - NefisTo...

NeFisTo 01-21-06 02:01 PM

5-0 Goin to me.

SlicKnife 01-21-06 05:43 PM

NeFisTo had a much better original punch...as mentioned, Haiku yours is played....

Vote - NeFisTo


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