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The End Is Here?
Lights Shut Off, Music Stops,Crowds Gone And The End Is Here.... Now I Really WonderIs It Time To Quit Mih 7 Month Long Rapping Carrier? Papers Gone And ,Tha Inks Running Out And The Mics Lossing It's Sound... Not A Shoueffer In Sight,Or Red Carpets For Mih Feet When Touch Ground.. Can't Find A Groupie Around,And Don't Have Enough Money To Travel Cross Town No Jewels On Mih Necc,Expensive Sneaks Or New Sets,Teeth Don't Even Shine Press Isn't Bum Rushing Me Didn't Have Mih Entorauge With Me Didn't Carry A 9 Somethings Goin On Can Sence Closer To Either Mih Life Or Mih Rapping Its A Danger... Im Asking Questions To Every Fan But People Look At Me Like A Stranger... Sit On The Pavement Wea Im Usually Harrased But Today Im Juss By Passed.. By Cars,Little Kids,Adults And Mih Familia I Feel Invisible To Every One I Ask.. Is The End Here?Should I Call It Quits? Do I Make The Right Decision By Leaving Thiss? The Car, Tha Crib,Tha Tours, And Tha Chiccs?? Put Mih Mic Down Because Retirement Something I Sence... |
Yo This Was Dope Son, I Was Feeling This Ish The Vocab And Everything Weerd, Man Nice piece 9/10
If You Dope You Got Long Beach In Ya Sig Weerd |
Lol Good Looking Money Long Beach Coming Bacc Tho You Already Know It................
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Hell Yes Nigka You Know This
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Yo Leave Some Feed On Thiss Shit............
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Hmmmmm flow is good.........I like the concept...topic is good.
I like how you putted your thoughts to the next line after line..... Good drop 9/10 werd dopeness mane |
Nice shit man...........good drop i like da hole thing i was feelin dis shit hard.....Pz RTF on one of my Open Mic's look for da new one "Freestyle (Diss)"
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More Feed................................
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it was pretty dope dawg but the flow kinda lacked ayy?
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ayyo kordozar go ahead and d/r on that battle with oreo, oreo aint gonna see the battle anymore igh
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When Did I Ever Dr???Some More Feed Tho.............
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damn, nice shit homie
i was feel'n dis shit fo real like a 8.5/10 |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=180564
Uppin More Feedbacc................. |
Hey Man I Really Feel This, It Was Dope, But If Your Thinken About Retirement Then Thats A Damn Good Way To End It Man I Hope To See More From Ya
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Nice peice had a clean flow to your lines and good structure. Your vocab was alright but there was alot of misspelling. I like the idea and where it was going. :thumbup:
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