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Old 03-06-05, 09:09 PM   #1
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No More Beef(Part One)

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Ha Ha

Beef Between Two Crews Collide On A Course
Ish Will Never Settle Like A Couples Divorce...
Socrates Think He King Of Rap Verse, Huh?
And Da Vinci Think He Dope Aha But Uhhh
This Beef With Me And Mad Dog Is Whack
Coz He Was Diminished By One Vote, Crap
Tony Gren Barking At Buck.Shot Like Whoa!
Then In The Mist You Got The Kid Sick Flow
Buck.Shot Bitting At Tony Green, Dumb Ish
Grafh Merking The Ish Out From Kid Hotshh!
But C.S. And The Council Sit Back And Relax
Twizted Government Fell Quicker Then Axe
Me And Buck.Shot Was Beefing Now None
This Rap Session Of A Confession Is Done

Yo Let The Whole Rap Verse Come Together
We Got To Rep This Site For It To Be Better
This Site Is Getting Whacked Floating Herbs
Nigkas Be Biting Lyrics, And Ish Like Weerd


Yo My Mans J Dot, Got His Ish Going On Here
And I've Just Ended A Couple Members Careers
If Any Thing This Site Is Like A Family, Ya Hear
Stop The Beef And Junk, And Make It Clear....
We're Here To Stay, Can't No Site Merk Us...
We Got Dope Mods, And UnderBoss Workers
Nos, May Be The Most Respected Member...
Think Back When Ya Was New, Remember?....
Believe You Me Nigka, I've Got Alot a Beef
But Ish Changes I Squashed Em' Like Leaves
You So Called "Vets" Need To Stop Acting..
Coz When Other Sites Visit Us The Start Laughing
We're The Most Advanced But F'ed Up Site
So Let's Squas Beef, And Keep It As A Rappers Delight


Weerd, See What I'm Saying, No More Beef Nigkas


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Old 03-06-05, 09:13 PM   #2
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dam this was a dope piece, good feeling behind it and i feel you there. Im done beefing with people, just battle it out and that should be the end of it. but this was good.. you got deep with it and thats respected. overall 9/10
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Old 03-06-05, 09:14 PM   #3
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Old 03-06-05, 09:16 PM   #4
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Damn Ya Last Battle??You Know Wea To Find Me At Tho Familia Good Shit On This Felt It Alot Stop Tha Beef Cunt Heads It Aint Normal Lmao.................
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Old 03-06-05, 09:18 PM   #5
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Old 03-06-05, 09:20 PM   #6
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Aww Damn Man Thiss Inspired Me To Make A Open Mic Mih Self........
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Old 03-06-05, 09:20 PM   #7
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True Loyalty Man Part Three It Coming Back Soon Yo, Feel Me Dawg?? It's How We Do
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Old 03-06-05, 09:23 PM   #8
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What Tha Hell Is True Loyalty???You Want Me To Be Apart Of It?Im Up For It .............
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Old 03-06-05, 09:24 PM   #9
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Hell yes, Man Me And Ya Brother Did The First One Yo Ish Was Dope
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Old 03-06-05, 09:34 PM   #10
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This was pretty good. The concepy was alright and everything else turned out good. The flow was dope because of the structure you used. And teh way you related to other members and what not made this piece even better. I dont think I remember seeing anybody use this kind of thing for a topic of an open mic so this also had nice originality. I also liked teh way you opened this piece...

Beef Between Two Crews Collide On A Course
Ish Will Never Settle Like A Couples Divorce...

It started out strong and helped me to want to read on in the piece. Nice overall job on this, stay up.
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Old 03-06-05, 09:36 PM   #11
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Thanks Man Good Looking With The Feed Yo
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Old 03-06-05, 10:13 PM   #12
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Yo This Was Good Fam...you Talking True Shit

Hey! My Name Is In There "the Mist" "spitting Sick Flowz"


O Shit I Feel Important. Cin Let These Fool's Know, Lmao


But Good Drop Fam It Was Nice Piece


9/10

Flow
Structure

And The Dopeness Of It You Was Talking True Shit Not Fak Shit
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Old 03-06-05, 10:15 PM   #13
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*Bows* Thank You All I Know True Weerds From An Underated Nigka Man
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Old 03-07-05, 08:19 AM   #14
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Pretty decent stuff
Mentioned my name a few times, i feel so damn important around here now, nall, just playin

but the Tony green aint even beef, he thinks it, i aint even serious with the flow against him, he just a newb that runs his mouth, i dont need'a get serious an start goin hard on that little nigga

but this was decent, the message you sent out in the rhymes was definately felt, enjoyed readin it

7.5/10
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Old 03-07-05, 08:21 AM   #15
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Oh Cinn, lemme get on the part 2 wit'chu, i wanna send a message out ta clear the air on any beef people may think i have? if its aight wit'chu, i want in on this so just pm me if thats cool wit'chu
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