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New Jersey Stand Up!!! - Enygma **New Hotness** Leave links
This is definitely one of my better tracks. It's also my first with the new mic.....so check the shit out.
Thanks to Thurdshift for hooking me up with the beat :thumbup:™ EDIT - I redid the track....instead of making a whole new thread, I figured I'd just edit into this one. lemme know which you liked better :thumbup:™ New Jersey Stand Up!!! New Jersey Stand Up!!! Part 2 It's for a contest that I'm entering.....make a theme song for the NJ Nets Links :thumbup:™ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222783 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222812 |
ok i'm peepin this out right
your quality def. got better your flow is pretty nice i like the hook just a lil more emotion and it'd be a lil better but your verse well first verse is pretty damn hot....flow is pretty nice....im likin this i'm feelin this....i think i'mma download this 9.5/10 this is a pretty hot track |
listening....
this is dope...nice way opening the track wit a hype hook more emotion needed, or maybe some more shit in it, like background voices would make it dope verse.... nice flow, shits tight emotion is good for this track punches are nice quality is dope hook again verse...same as second, lil better flow hook again... verse... always dope on this track man, good fuhken work, i can definitly picture them cheer leaders on the court before the game at the end of the track clappin they hands to the beat and gettin the fans hype one |
sounds trendy
not too sure about your voice on that hook though...wasn't convincing to me flow is nice lyrics are pretty good solid drop bro gud luck with this competition |
Wow,This Is Hott!
Like This A Lot,Hooks Dope Verse,nice,feeling your delivery,suits this wayy well!,good lyrics and great presence,nice qual good flow! hook...... Verse,bout the same,nice! hook ... verse again bout the same good shit overall 9/10 RTFhttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2673927#post2673927 |
i heard about this on the radio was thinken bout doing that but i couldnt do that to all my detroit people so...
beat is hyfey as fuck.. yeah i like that hook is good.. not the best but good quality is meh.. could be better,... lyrcis throughout the track are dope this song will hopefully do a pretty good job in this comp... third verse is best of em all.. good luck 8/10 |
yea that hook is good but gets a tad bit monotonous the verse is real tyte and ya quality only gon get better as u get more accustomed to this mic.. this beat seems to work ya style real solid ide have to say you got a good shot
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alright first thing is the beat is pretty cool. so thurdfshift did a good job with that.
alright your hook. i know everyone alredy said it but i didnt like it too much. it jus seems like there something missing. maybe recording it a couple more times or something. not really sure. verses were defintely good. not great but good. lyrically i think you've stepped up from previous tracks. good track man. keep it up |
Thanks for all the input. I think I'm gonna re-record it before I submit it cause there are a few spots that I wanted to polish up, but you guys gave me a good idea of the feedback I will get from it, so thanks :thumbup:™
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Fuck the Nets. But ill ass track. Hook was bad but the verses all but made up for it. Beat I heard before but it's better with someone on it lol. Nice track son. Jerz in the building muhfuckas.
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Updated :thumbup:™
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that was hot e, word.
im glad to see you still smashin' fam. keep up the good work brutha. ...the super... |
i lstened to part 2...thsi shitt was str8 fiya, if i getta chance to lsiten to part 1 ill edit this post...but jea, im lovin that beat....you also gotta great amount of emotiona dn the delivery and flow is nice...overall theres not really anything to complain about on this track... btw i can tell this is a new mic lol
*cood ya rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420 |
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh good shit....3rd-shift is in the building mutha fuckaz
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^^^uppin' for e.....
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