This is definitely one of my better tracks. It's also my first with the new mic.....so check the shit out.

Thanks to Thurdshift for hooking me up with the beat ™

EDIT -
I redid the track....instead of making a whole new thread, I figured I'd just edit into this one. lemme know which you liked better ™

New Jersey Stand Up!!!

New Jersey Stand Up!!! Part 2

It's for a contest that I'm entering.....make a theme song for the NJ Nets


Links ™
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222783
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222812

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ok i'm peepin this out right

your quality def. got better

your flow is pretty nice i like the hook just a lil more emotion and it'd be a lil better

but your verse well first verse is pretty damn hot....flow is pretty nice....im likin this

i'm feelin this....i think i'mma download this

9.5/10

this is a pretty hot track

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TheMyspace

listening....

this is dope...nice way opening the track wit a hype hook

more emotion needed, or maybe some more shit in it, like background voices would make it dope

verse....

nice flow, shits tight
emotion is good for this track
punches are nice
quality is dope

hook again

verse...same as second, lil better flow

hook again...

verse... always dope on this track man, good fuhken work,

i can definitly picture them cheer leaders on the court before the game at the end of the track clappin they hands to the beat and gettin the fans hype

one

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sounds trendy

not too sure about your voice on that hook though...wasn't convincing to me

flow is nice


lyrics are pretty good


solid drop bro

gud luck with this competition

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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

Wow,This Is Hott!
Like This A Lot,Hooks Dope
Verse,nice,feeling your delivery,suits this wayy well!,good lyrics and great presence,nice qual
good flow!

hook......

Verse,bout the same,nice!

hook ...

verse again bout the same

good shit
overall
9/10

RTFhttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2673927#post2673927

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OYD MAFIA

i heard about this on the radio was thinken bout doing that but i couldnt do that to all my detroit people so...

beat is hyfey as fuck.. yeah i like that

hook is good.. not the best but good

quality is meh.. could be better,...

lyrcis throughout the track are dope this song will hopefully do a pretty good job in this comp... third verse is best of em all..

good luck
8/10

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yea that hook is good but gets a tad bit monotonous the verse is real tyte and ya quality only gon get better as u get more accustomed to this mic.. this beat seems to work ya style real solid ide have to say you got a good shot

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alright first thing is the beat is pretty cool. so thurdfshift did a good job with that.

alright your hook. i know everyone alredy said it but i didnt like it too much. it jus seems like there something missing. maybe recording it a couple more times or something. not really sure.

verses were defintely good. not great but good. lyrically i think you've stepped up from previous tracks.

good track man. keep it up

Thanks for all the input. I think I'm gonna re-record it before I submit it cause there are a few spots that I wanted to polish up, but you guys gave me a good idea of the feedback I will get from it, so thanks ™

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Fuck the Nets. But ill ass track. Hook was bad but the verses all but made up for it. Beat I heard before but it's better with someone on it lol. Nice track son. Jerz in the building muhfuckas.

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Updated ™

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that was hot e, word.

im glad to see you still smashin' fam. keep up the good work brutha.


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i lstened to part 2...thsi shitt was str8 fiya, if i getta chance to lsiten to part 1 ill edit this post...but jea, im lovin that beat....you also gotta great amount of emotiona dn the delivery and flow is nice...overall theres not really anything to complain about on this track... btw i can tell this is a new mic lol

*cood ya rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh good shit....3rd-shift is in the building mutha fuckaz

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