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BaM! vs Kon.Tay.Juz
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-09-05 at 02:37 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
BaM! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 02:12 PM.
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Kon.Tay.Juz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-05 02:16 PM.
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Your text stinks yo, even your audio mic tosses fresh mints
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They said SIG, you misunderstood what the establish meant! This battle is a Godsend, seriously easy win to seal Yeah, I rewind your tracks…..playing with hot wheels It’s ironic to think, another kon is behind tough bars… Only time his line’s are on point, when he types an exclamation mark! You belong in the dark, with a leash, and maybe a shock collar Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers! I could stop this right now, the war against bacteria would end today Drop the mic, but with your bad breath… it would probably run away! |
Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me..
This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy.. Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves.. Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves.. Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man.. Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams.. Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B... My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy.. I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch.. ...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch.. |
Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me..
This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy.. Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves.. Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves.. Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man.. Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams.. Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B... My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy.. I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch.. ...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch.. blah..... |
Voted For: BaM!
V/bam Structure-kon....Bam try and make ur lines end at the same point, then ull cop a better flow....Kon had good sttructure and better flow. Vocab-No vocab wut so ever in this battle biggest word excalmation lol so no vote in this catergorie Personals-Bam no doubt got kon on that...kon ur first bar was mad played i just thought of 2 pack wit that rhyme scheme playa.......Bam \had fresh shit. Punches-Bam.....bam had fresh punches hitting hard on everypoint.....Kon urs were kinda played but urs hit also just not as hard as bam. Multies-No multies were hott or noticable in either verses both up on that fo real originality-Bam was more fresh and hard hitting disses....kon urs was iight but u lacked punches that hit hard...no hate just stating my opinion RETURN THE FAVOR OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED |
sall hood ...................wasnt played to me. cuz i havent been on dis sirte forever. buit i guess its played if u say
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^^ay man no hate..........................................
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ayyo RTF or i will remove my vote!
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ill check out one of your links when i get 20 votes
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz
Your text stinks yo, even your audio mic tosses fresh mints Quote: Originally Posted by Kon’s crew Rep us in your sig. They said SIG, you misunderstood what the establish meant! ^^didn't rhyme homie...punch was weak...2/10 This battle is a Godsend, seriously easy win to seal Yeah, I rewind your tracks…..playing with hot wheels ^^flowed bad and punch sucked...2/10 It’s ironic to think, another kon is behind tough bars… Only time his line’s are on point, when he types an exclamation mark! ^^c'mon man...rhyme...played and basic punch too...2/10 You belong in the dark, with a leash, and maybe a shock collar Just because vets ride your dick, doesn’t mean that you’re ballers! ^^vets ride his dick?..more like a complement...2/10 I could stop this right now, the war against bacteria would end today Drop the mic, but with your bad breath… it would probably run away! ^^PLAYED OUT SINCE 1993...bad breath? OK...structure was OK.Flow sucked badly.Had too many lines that didn't rhyme.mint/meant....collar/ballers...mark/bars?...NO.As for punches...you need more concepts.That last bar...bacteria/bad breath?...need more creativity Im Equipped Wit the Winnin "Edge", But Please dont push me.. This Kids like a lez porno flick..............All I'm see'in is pussy.. ^^PLayed and basic...2/10 Steppin to Me?.....kids gon' be chillin with christopher reeves.. Cuz I stay with Heataz that has santa....take off his sleeves.. ^^Reeves lines are played..but punch ight..4/10 Never bite the hand that feeds you.......You less than a man.. Call Me the pyro freak.....................Cuz nigga, i make bams.. ^^No punch....1/10 Don't mistake me doe........cuz i got hoes on the streets..B... My lines the condom..So when you fuck em, You die from aids like easy.. ^^no punch...stop talkin bout yaself and diss..0/10 I'm Equipped with acid spits, that detach your wrists, Blast this bitch.. ...........This Nigga got no game, like that white boi in hitch.. ^^OK.....3/10 OK...structure was Nice.Flow was meh?...had a basic rhyme scheme.Punches lacked...but at least they were better than the other guy to give you the win.But here wat...next time use more creativity.You too basic and shit.And don't self glorify so much. Vote-Kon.Tay.juz VOTE IN LINK BELOW OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203668 |
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This was feedback posted for BaM!
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ay oh famz.....im uppin this battle.............................
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