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If I Was Time...
If I was time I'd be in digital format, Wiping my feet at the moons doormat... I would've extended 3 minutes in the earth's rotation Before that... If I was time... I'd be the hour You spend standing in line To ride the Medusa at 6 Flags One more time... If I was time, You'd never have enough of me, And you'd always try to be ahead of me... I'd change my name to Rolex And tick steadily... Constantly... Infinitely... I'd set you back an hour of your life Once every year, And make you lose sleep as well... If I was time, Would you be able to tell Even in light or dark spells If I was a sundial In Alaska? Or would you just let me run Right past you? If I was time... |
Good piece, enjoyed your vocab and use of words...you played well into the metaphor...flow was on point and you established it in the first few lines 9/10
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Bumpin this thing for some feed ill rtf for whoever leaves me feed thanks
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ay good drop man...u played this very well...nice use of wording also...pce
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