e-dubz vs sabotage
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2 bars- best punches no crew votes no hate votes no d/r votes no biting need 300 posts to vote Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 11-15-04 at 12:17 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 09:25 PM.
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sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-04 10:49 PM.
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had to rush it but here it is
E heard his sh!t was good but it was Nature Calling, this herbs fake You couldn’t be ‘pure dopeness if you ‘swallowed your first name’* Couldn’t make a difference if u were a minus problem..u crumbling like soggy cookies They should call me the ‘vet’, notice the way im checkin this pussy *pure dopeness is under his name.....first name is e(short for ecstasy) |
already dropped......................................
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i get under yo skin, leave yo with the dermatologist
but this is only stage one cause murda will follow this by now sabotage know im dope man.. and i dont loose while your so called 'hot lines' require a 'phone booth' |
uppin this battle...
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Voted For: e-dubz
e-dubz took this.....neither were great but sabatages structure? nah don't like it, thought e had beta flow n had the stronger punches... v/e can ya hit this wiv an honest vote, y'all know how fustratin it is wen battles get slept on so plz return the favour...pz http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159868 |
^umm ok...............
.........uppin 4 votes........... |
Voted For: sabotage
Feedback for my man sabotage. That e-line made me laugh man, haha, Dope battle. Vote removed |
Damn........
Errrm, In case you can't tell by the first 5 words, that was meant to be feedback, Sorry........ Get it deleted or whatever you gotta do. |
Voted For: e-dubz
i like the wordplay in the first line........ althought the second line sounded more like filler...... coulda switched them up, and it woulda been better i think........ second bar was better punchline wise.....although u spelled "lose" wrong, and the finisher was pretty good...... i aint heard it before so it aint played to me..... overall it was better then sabotage now sabo...... poor poor sabo.... lmao, ur first two lines dont RHYME....... how can u write four lines and not have some of them rhyme..... the line was pretty dope wen u figure out wat it means, but the explanation takes away from the feelin u get..... and "minus problem" was worded pretty bad..... and wat does a vet have to do with checkin pussies????? maybe theres sumthin i dont get, but it really shouldnt have the 's for "vet" to me........ overall u didnt do bad, buit neither of ur lines worked well v/e-dubz |
dawg u must be dumb if u dont understand that........
......pussy is a cat.....cat is an animal.....vets check animals....... ......ur an idiot.......... |
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should sed "checkin this cat" then...... less connections needa be made |
uppin this shit..
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