1st Drop (AGAIN)
 

this is a freestyle...totally off the head....and its my first..so dont be harsh..lol...

Like Common, Im "Something To Be"
Im so Gangster, Pussy Chicks Dont Wana "Fuck" With me
If Ur A "Star", Then Im a Galaxy
Ill End Ur Life, And U Know I Mean This
Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas
Hating One Me and Trying To Be Me Is A Lose-Lose Situation
Ur Not Who U Say U R, Ur Like Eminem In His Videos, Impersonating
U Play Video Games, Thats The Only Way u Know Bout "Action"
U And Ur Girl Communicate, So U only Know Bout One Thing Im "Packing"
Me And Rap Go Together Like Butter And Toast, Birds Of The Same Feather
U and Getting Fried Go Together, Cuz U cant Have One Without The Other

Post feedback on wat u think...no hating plz ......


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...37&page=1&pp=15

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not bad but work on your structure and some words didnt rhyme but ok

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202138
 

my link(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202138) drop a line or critique

Live double cats give me trouble annoy my styles with
Toys and smiles but don’t bother to call talked over swift
With my father and all so I feel larger and tall owning a gift
WTF street shoot outs, selling too much rifles which leads to
Such trifles as drive bys hope this kind of jive dies god we need you
If you take money then you’re a fake dummy if you don’t payback
Stay whack looking for a hand out all understand what you about just a stray act

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Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas

^lol....iight, i see yu


for a keystyle...this was pretty clean...slick punches throughout...good job...I wanna see some more from yu....

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yeah dis was ok for a quick thing, u had some hot lines tho, like

If Ur A "Star", Then Im a Galaxy
and
Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas
^lol that 1 made me laugh, plus adidas shelltoes r my favourite shoe :love: lol
but yeah, keep droppin! :thumbup: RTF in either my open mic r battle. peace.

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