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Explict vs MyNd. FuLL
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No-hate-crew-d/r votes No-feedin all votes must be explained you spit 1st.. i'll spit when you done.. Good Luck!! |
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dam just saw this shit...
i will be dropping later on today i guess good luck checkity check in.... i'm doing like 10-12 lines |
DAMN .. dawg you know how many PM's i have sent you so you can check in..
its been 4 days since this was set up...hurry up and drop your verse.. i'll ne back to spit when you done... |
Decided to go ten...
got shit to do...match or go your 20 i dont care... Whether an herb or fake vet description easily fits...Xplicit’s ...Wont waste a good start... Which is why your names at the end of this ^ sentence... Crew cant hang for the long run....it expires at the end of ‘03... ...Stock have plummeted and.. Microsoft’s pissed cuz XP upgraded still aint better than ME... Ya crews a joke if you didnt know....well thats just too bad... ...My crew visits your forum... When we’re bored....to kick back and have a few laughs... Didn’t answer your PM’s get the clue...u’re being ignored.... ...Name either played or bitten... Cuz its been used by half the newbs on these boards... This is a no brainer...an easy win no need for me to pretend... ...Man just give up.. Cuz this time even feeble couldn’t give you this win... keyed edited for spelling... |
ok been almost 24 hours since i dropped
uppin for this kid to spit... 100 characters 100 characters |
| I guarantee a win by at least four out of five,
| you'll never bite again when your teeth and my punch's | force collide, I'm dissin your feared looks, fag style | and queer hooks. you have less chance of gettin signed | than a retarded kids yearbook, I leave you shook fast clown, | peep the raw side of me when I chant sounds, and blast wimps | till they're past tense(tents) like walkin through camp | grounds, wound infliction brings truth to your doom's | prediction, there looms suspicion you're fake as cartoon | depiction, beatin soon to submission, that's not good for | you son cause you're consumed with fiction, I pull out all | the stops when battling while you assume restrictions, | ironic how I'm verbally muderdin this muderous verbalist.. | his verse is superfluous, dispersin fists like he prefers | to miss, pre writin his verse until he hurts his wrist, | he's not even worth my diss.. | I'm doin this merely for elevational purposes |
it was a good battle
flow mynd wordplay explicit vocab mynd punches mynd multis explicit over all vote goes to mynd |
Dawg... you have to have 5+ wins to post a vote here. 2nd you cant even vote in frontlines.. what makes you think you can do so here.. damn newbs...
uppin for some honest none newbish votes.... PZ |
yo this battle was hard to read for a second, might want to tighten up yall's structure so the retards can grasp the punches...
Opener: mynd Flow: XP Originality: tie Personals: XP Punches: XP Best Punch: XP "I'm dissin your feared looks, fag style | and queer hooks. you have less chance of gettin signed | than a retarded kids yearbook" Closer: tie Vote: Xp hit my battle with B.I.Detained up w/ a fair vote pz |
gotta diasgree.........
Breakdown--- Punches-Mynd Flow-Ex Personals-Nuttin special Structure-Mynd..reminds me of sum1 Metas-Both Creativity-Mind Overall-Mynd not a bad battle but it was a hard read for both but the creativity from Mynd was pretty ill pz MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97780 |
opener - mynd...explicits didnt even rhyme
closer - mynd...Damn personal...X that was not great punches - mynd...most were personal punches...harder hitting personals - mynd...just about the whole verse was personal wordplay - XP had great wordplay...much props yo vocab - XP vocab was precise and down packed originality - XP cartoon line was coo overal - elite type verse from mynd personalized and just a little better |
^^agree.....Mynd had a much more complex and harder hitting verse.....Explict had some decent punches...but none were nearly as hard as Mynd's.....here's the best line from the battle to me..
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BREAKDOWN Multis - Neither Metas - Mynd Punches - Mynd Structure - Tie Vocab - Tie Flow - Explict RhymeScheme - Mynd Wordplay - Mynd Creativity - Mynd Complexity - Mynd Overall - it was pretty one sided in my opinion....sorry Explict...but Mynd got this with his creativity and punches....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote... Both Of Yall Give Honest Votes With My Shit Against E.Coli Or Emerge (will be done later tonight) peace 4:20 |
uppin for more honest votes on this battle.....................
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^^^take my name off your winz list...and if u want me to vote honestly let me know and i'll drop honesty....didnt wanna do it now cuz u might think its hate...no hate..u just got mad d/r votes....so u want me to vote?
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