10-20 lines

No-hate-crew-d/r votes
No-feedin

all votes must be explained
you spit 1st.. i'll spit when you done..


Good Luck!!

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dam just saw this shit...
i will be dropping later on today i guess
good luck

checkity check in....

i'm doing like 10-12 lines

DAMN .. dawg you know how many PM's i have sent you so you can check in..
its been 4 days since this was set up...hurry up and drop your verse..
i'll ne back to spit when you done...

Decided to go ten...
got shit to do...match or go your 20
i dont care...


Whether an herb or fake vet description easily fits...Xplicit’s
...Wont waste a good start...
Which is why your names at the end of this ^ sentence...
Crew cant hang for the long run....it expires at the end of ‘03...
...Stock have plummeted and..
Microsoft’s pissed cuz XP upgraded still aint better than ME...
Ya crews a joke if you didnt know....well thats just too bad...
...My crew visits your forum...
When we’re bored....to kick back and have a few laughs...
Didn’t answer your PM’s get the clue...u’re being ignored....
...Name either played or bitten...
Cuz its been used by half the newbs on these boards...
This is a no brainer...an easy win no need for me to pretend...
...Man just give up..
Cuz this time even feeble couldn’t give you this win...


keyed

edited for spelling...

ok been almost 24 hours since i dropped
uppin for this kid to spit...
100 characters 100 characters

| I guarantee a win by at least four out of five,
| you'll never bite again when your teeth and my punch's
| force collide, I'm dissin your feared looks, fag style
| and queer hooks. you have less chance of gettin signed
| than a retarded kids yearbook, I leave you shook fast clown,
| peep the raw side of me when I chant sounds, and blast wimps
| till they're past tense(tents) like walkin through camp
| grounds, wound infliction brings truth to your doom's
| prediction, there looms suspicion you're fake as cartoon
| depiction, beatin soon to submission, that's not good for
| you son cause you're consumed with fiction, I pull out all
| the stops when battling while you assume restrictions,
| ironic how I'm verbally muderdin this muderous verbalist..
| his verse is superfluous, dispersin fists like he prefers
| to miss, pre writin his verse until he hurts his wrist,
| he's not even worth my diss..
| I'm doin this merely for elevational purposes

it was a good battle
flow mynd
wordplay explicit
vocab mynd
punches mynd
multis explicit
over all vote goes to mynd

Dawg... you have to have 5+ wins to post a vote here. 2nd you cant even vote in frontlines.. what makes you think you can do so here.. damn newbs...

uppin for some honest none newbish votes....

PZ

yo this battle was hard to read for a second, might want to tighten up yall's structure so the retards can grasp the punches...

Opener: mynd
Flow: XP
Originality: tie
Personals: XP
Punches: XP
Best Punch: XP "I'm dissin your feared looks, fag style
| and queer hooks. you have less chance of gettin signed
| than a retarded kids yearbook"
Closer: tie

Vote: Xp

hit my battle with B.I.Detained up w/ a fair vote

pz

gotta diasgree.........
Breakdown---
Punches-Mynd
Flow-Ex
Personals-Nuttin special
Structure-Mynd..reminds me of sum1
Metas-Both
Creativity-Mind
Overall-Mynd
not a bad battle but it was a hard read for
both but the creativity from Mynd was pretty ill
pz

MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97780

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

opener - mynd...explicits didnt even rhyme
closer - mynd...Damn personal...X that was not great
punches - mynd...most were personal punches...harder hitting
personals - mynd...just about the whole verse was personal
wordplay - XP had great wordplay...much props yo
vocab - XP vocab was precise and down packed
originality - XP cartoon line was coo
overal - elite type verse from mynd personalized and just a little better

^^agree.....Mynd had a much more complex and harder hitting verse.....Explict had some decent punches...but none were nearly as hard as Mynd's.....here's the best line from the battle to me..

^^haha...XP line was tight...good work yo...

BREAKDOWN
Multis - Neither
Metas - Mynd
Punches - Mynd
Structure - Tie
Vocab - Tie
Flow - Explict
RhymeScheme - Mynd
Wordplay - Mynd
Creativity - Mynd
Complexity - Mynd
Overall - it was pretty one sided in my opinion....sorry Explict...but Mynd got this with his creativity and punches....good read from u both though...no hate...just a vote...

Both Of Yall Give Honest Votes With My Shit Against E.Coli Or Emerge (will be done later tonight)

peace
4:20

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uppin for more honest votes on this battle.....................
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