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Slim Thug 11-25-03 01:18 AM

executive vs Yungheadwrecka
 
Ight heres mine...

First, YUNGHEADWRECKAS rhymes'll pierce you and put
holes~in~ya~lungs/
Blows leave ya stung, Makin this Fool touch his
toes~to~his~tounge//
Calling yourself ill? That shouldn't be legal, Kid your war
raps are feeble/
Be decietful, Leave this fool shot up and more 'Holier' than
a fuckin Cathedreal//
But YUNG still makes you die fast from a tripple by pass/
Till your arteries get so FAT you'll be beggin ME for
slim~fast//
Now The rest dismays, But this Faggot's whack and missin his
health/
^^^ Kid you suck at throwin punches, That's why I be dissin'
myself// (Slim Fast line)
I'm really sorry you keep spitting whackass lines hoping we
quote em/
But honestly (executive)...Fat punches just don't connect
like broken modems//
Yo~dem Tips Lye~In~ya~Dome, I'm not Cocky Just
Inspirement~Prone/
Trash ya OLD PLAYED rhymes and send you to a fuckin
Retirement-Home!!//
You can't defeat the Best, so I seek stress to find this
geek's less/
A weak head, his 'Poor Postin' turned his clothin' to 'Cheap
Threads'//
Mothafucka! I'll leave starvin’ leeches in the cracks of your
pores/
The Only underground (executive) reps is where i'm stashin
his corpse//
I just ripped up executive tha bitch from lyrical soliders,
My verse killed yours cuz my shit was awake as if it was
sippin on folgers,
Well thats it I just dropped my shit, 19 lines just ended it,
"The bad guys" a shame I knew you was lame/
Uppercut this Fool so hard his molars chew through his
brain//

executive 11-25-03 01:24 AM

Like pussy this ~bitch~ bleeds commonly and needs a ~pad~to hold his flow~/
Freestyling? naw that’s called prewriting like a ~newspaper~ add ~2 bold to show~/
Shit I just ruined his week, younghead the type of pussy to ~hide and go seek~/
But after I spit this unique technique he’ll need a~ guide to go speak~ /
Like a ~midgets temper~ Young is falling too short/
young” abort!.. ~ur head” needs support! my punches got you aching more than ur ~genital wart~/
him Ill? No..Common colds” hold more spit than this kid does/
u had such a long as verse but I failed to see where the illness” was/
honestly u think you could win with a prewritten verse you dumb new b”
im gunna stop at ten lines report ur shit so don’t act like you new me…….

Slim Thug 11-25-03 01:25 AM

Nice verse...Lets see what tha ppl think............................................. .....................

Verse112 11-25-03 01:28 AM

ahhaha its so obvious you pre-wrote man... and your 3 and 0 omg are all your wins pre-writin?...vote definatly goes to the executive nice word play and rhyme scheme plz hit this up with your honest opinion thanx... Ex=winner you should be DQ'ed yung.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94199

Slim Thug 11-25-03 01:30 AM

This was all spit up at tha moment shit boy look at yo record 0-4 and too bad u cant poll this faggit.

Verse112 11-25-03 01:31 AM

hahahah you didn't post rules ....fuck my record and the fact that i can't post you know you lost have a good one.

TAG 11-25-03 01:39 AM

OPener: Ex
CLoser: Yung
Personals: Ex
Punches: Yung
Flow: Ex
Man Yung ya need ta shorte ya shit. Both had alright drops. Ex's was more packed with Personals, and punces. I gave Yung the punch vote cause he had more (obviously) and most were on target. No hate, jus a vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94196

Rhymes 11-25-03 01:44 AM

aight aight
im wid tag
the ex took this
holla back at this battle


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=94204

peace

Slim Thug 11-25-03 10:13 AM

Uppin for votes .

Rhymes 11-25-03 10:31 AM

ima poll vote
on overall ex

better everythin
although the other dude tryed keep goin


peace

Token 11-25-03 10:40 AM

Punches- Ex
Flow- Ex
Stucture- HORRIBLE
Metas- Ex
Multis- Yung

Vote- Executive... Both need to stop with these /s "s and especially the ~s

Slim Thug 11-25-03 11:10 AM

uppin this for some more votes .

explicitot 11-25-03 11:10 AM

god damn yung muthafuka ripped dis shit up
fuckin multies was hot nice battle
the breakdown:
metta=young
punches=young(though there were a few nice ones from ex)
flow=tie
effort=ex
structure=young
overall=young

vote=young

Slim Thug 11-25-03 11:23 AM

Put up a poll vote not just in tha thread~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Slim Thug 11-25-03 02:04 PM

Uppin for all u hoes.............................................. ...............................................


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