Ight heres mine...

First, YUNGHEADWRECKAS rhymes'll pierce you and put
holes~in~ya~lungs/
Blows leave ya stung, Makin this Fool touch his
toes~to~his~tounge//
Calling yourself ill? That shouldn't be legal, Kid your war
raps are feeble/
Be decietful, Leave this fool shot up and more 'Holier' than
a fuckin Cathedreal//
But YUNG still makes you die fast from a tripple by pass/
Till your arteries get so FAT you'll be beggin ME for
slim~fast//
Now The rest dismays, But this Faggot's whack and missin his
health/
^^^ Kid you suck at throwin punches, That's why I be dissin'
myself// (Slim Fast line)
I'm really sorry you keep spitting whackass lines hoping we
quote em/
But honestly (executive)...Fat punches just don't connect
like broken modems//
Yo~dem Tips Lye~In~ya~Dome, I'm not Cocky Just
Inspirement~Prone/
Trash ya OLD PLAYED rhymes and send you to a fuckin
Retirement-Home!!//
You can't defeat the Best, so I seek stress to find this
geek's less/
A weak head, his 'Poor Postin' turned his clothin' to 'Cheap
Threads'//
Mothafucka! I'll leave starvin’ leeches in the cracks of your
pores/
The Only underground (executive) reps is where i'm stashin
his corpse//
I just ripped up executive tha bitch from lyrical soliders,
My verse killed yours cuz my shit was awake as if it was
sippin on folgers,
Well thats it I just dropped my shit, 19 lines just ended it,
"The bad guys" a shame I knew you was lame/
Uppercut this Fool so hard his molars chew through his
brain//

Like pussy this ~bitch~ bleeds commonly and needs a ~pad~to hold his flow~/
Freestyling? naw that’s called prewriting like a ~newspaper~ add ~2 bold to show~/
Shit I just ruined his week, younghead the type of pussy to ~hide and go seek~/
But after I spit this unique technique he’ll need a~ guide to go speak~ /
Like a ~midgets temper~ Young is falling too short/
young” abort!.. ~ur head” needs support! my punches got you aching more than ur ~genital wart~/
him Ill? No..Common colds” hold more spit than this kid does/
u had such a long as verse but I failed to see where the illness” was/
honestly u think you could win with a prewritten verse you dumb new b”
im gunna stop at ten lines report ur shit so don’t act like you new me…….

Nice verse...Lets see what tha ppl think............................................. .....................

ahhaha its so obvious you pre-wrote man... and your 3 and 0 omg are all your wins pre-writin?...vote definatly goes to the executive nice word play and rhyme scheme plz hit this up with your honest opinion thanx... Ex=winner you should be DQ'ed yung.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94199

This was all spit up at tha moment shit boy look at yo record 0-4 and too bad u cant poll this faggit.

hahahah you didn't post rules ....fuck my record and the fact that i can't post you know you lost have a good one.

OPener: Ex
CLoser: Yung
Personals: Ex
Punches: Yung
Flow: Ex
Man Yung ya need ta shorte ya shit. Both had alright drops. Ex's was more packed with Personals, and punces. I gave Yung the punch vote cause he had more (obviously) and most were on target. No hate, jus a vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94196

aight aight
im wid tag
the ex took this
holla back at this battle


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=94204

peace

Uppin for votes .

ima poll vote
on overall ex

better everythin
although the other dude tryed keep goin


peace

Punches- Ex
Flow- Ex
Stucture- HORRIBLE
Metas- Ex
Multis- Yung

Vote- Executive... Both need to stop with these /s "s and especially the ~s

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

uppin this for some more votes .

god damn yung muthafuka ripped dis shit up
fuckin multies was hot nice battle
the breakdown:
metta=young
punches=young(though there were a few nice ones from ex)
flow=tie
effort=ex
structure=young
overall=young

vote=young

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