Natural killa vs Young Montana
 

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3-0 KO

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Young Montana has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-05 03:16 PM.

ur shit trash, and your, wack, therefore you wont last to score
approach and ill leave u stretched like that dude from Fantastic 4
my choppers defeat, mine is well quit cus im on top of the G (Game)
b real, u beatin me is like seein sumbody robbin a theif
unlikely, ur unlike me, cus girls got me straight and delight
this nigga became happy, wen he found out he wasnt the only nigga Gay On The Site
u prolly want to get wit the q and start layin the pipe
buh u ugly as shit so he would prolly rather run away witta wife
i stay witta knife, and ill shank ya easy, i see wa the fuss about
Natural Killa? i hope u kno playin Grand theft auto doesnt count
1st ima end ya internet career, then ya life is next
this dude'll prolly still b a virgin if the nigga didnt hav Cyber Sex
i got tools to leave you bruised, so its best that you play it cool
you shoulda learned not to fuck wit Montana, next time bitch stay in school
you da lamest dude, fall back, cus my hammers explode clips
and itll make ya ass lose weight faster than Anna Nicole Smith...........

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-15-05 03:50 PM.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=177840
^^HIs pic,

wanna pick a vet and lick the threats,while dying to stick with text
when I'ma stab ya massive chin,pull ya braids,and kick ya breast
see,it's all simple,you and the pimple,too ugly,ya wouldn't be a model for shit,
so hear what kid,go to here,and buy yaself a bottle 'a this
ya too lame to substain,puttin ya son in his shame when your frontin in exchange
cuz only your own verses alone are as played as puttin young in a name
ur stayin for blades after i start raiding ya place,makin u bathe wit grenades
your not even a welcomed guess (guest) when your playing charades
i'll spill your blood while ya see ya brother cough it,simply off this
only str8 facts (fax) you spit,is writing ya shit in your mother office
ya homies whack nigga,I'm beatin them down for meetin the wrong route
n it proves ur a pawn,joinin crew,named after leader's hometown
muting ya flows,without the bootin n smokes,when i'm shootin ya clothes
so it's suitin ya blows,n even he knows he a clown,his AIM's DaFutureJoke
Montana be jugglin with the flutes,while the real cats be tucking in the loot
I'm tellin u suckers the truth,n life's only hard to ugly mother fuckers like you


READ HERE
check his profile...aim is DaFutureJoke....and his crew's name is TriggaTown..which is where Tony Green(the leader) puts as his location.

Don't understand anything else..don't vote...

Understand both verses or don't vote...Good Luck Young Montana :thumbup:

lol.........good shit son, good luck, uppin............................

yea....nice verse by you too......good luck homie..

Voted For: Natural killa

hmmm pretty decent battle here.....
young montana- i think your punches were too simple...you could have come much more complex with them and more original....your structure was off therefore it didn't flow as well.....you had a few lines here and there that were quite funny but not enough to take the win.....
natural killa- flow was on point and you came original with the punches....i liked your opening lines....
see,it's all simple,you and the pimple,too ugly,ya wouldn't be a model for shit,
so hear what kid,go to here,and buy yaself a bottle 'a this
^^^that was funny.......wordplay was nice.....you did enough in this battle to take the win....
vote- Natural Killa

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