Cameronj86 (0-0) vs. Triflin (0-0)
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checking in, good luck in the battle and les see who will win this one. Verses due in by thursday........................................
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Wickedness is spilled and left there for Cameron to absorb
If defeat was a cure, then its obvious you’ll never be ill on this board Fill in this Void, Votes are coming up short like midgets in abortion clinics Critics? This is fence text, The way I look at your rhymes and Picket.. Rip threw you spirits I don’t understand your point so I’m missing the view Trifes executes flows of an epidemic that doctors wouldn’t pursue You’re a waste slut, like hookers your verse is used and aged much Split acres and build crops enslave Cameron, battle locked and chained up Extract of egg yolks the way I beat you, and batter this fool I’ll salvage your crew, and treat you like waste and dispose of you 2 If text is a skill you’ve developed then by god help us all from ruining our eyes No one wants to read you pre-writs Cameron, we can read between your lines. |
Trife's job is to relieve "stress" in guys pants like a homosexual tailor
This dude is only in front cuz his rhymes lead.... to failure You trying to be something you're not, we know your faking the funk That's why I "crush you in my sleep" like fat guys on the top bunk You couldn't win in this battle if there was d/r voting Trife you couldn't get a hot sig (cig) if you took up smoking (wtf "taking a leap") someone musta "pulled the cotton over your eyes" cuz after reading ya sig It's clear you must be blinded "like your fitted's too big" You will never have the "lead" in this "play" on words The only time "you do something" with words is when you use "verbs" (verbs are doing words) You can't beat me Trife, ya words are pure fiction. This aint a bragging tourny, you gotta work on ya dissin The only reason ya rhymes are "def" is cuz no-one listening |
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neither really had the best punches. Trife had a better flow(what was the deal with fence text? you picket? I get picket fence but that line really doesnt make sense)and metas but cameron had better creativity and wordplay and he had PERSONALS!!!
cameron gets this one vote=Cameronj86 |
Wickedness is spilled and left there for Cameron to absorb
If defeat was a cure, then its obvious you’ll never be ill on this board ^reasonable opener Fill in this Void, Votes are coming up short like midgets in abortion clinics played^ Critics? This is fence text, The way I look at your rhymes and Picket.. decent wordplay alright punch^ Rip threw you spirits I don’t understand your point so I’m missing the view Trifes executes flows of an epidemic that doctors wouldn’t pursue ^not really feelin that You’re a waste slut, like hookers your verse is used and aged much ^played hooker shit Split acres and build crops enslave Cameron, battle locked and chained up ^hmmmm Extract of egg yolks the way I beat you, and batter this fool ^good I’ll salvage your crew, and treat you like waste and dispose of you 2 ^alright If text is a skill you’ve developed then by god help us all from ruining our eyes No one wants to read you pre-writs Cameron, we can read between your lines ^decent finisher ____________________________________________ Camerons verse.... Trife's job is to relieve "stress" in guys pants like a homosexual tailor ^played....blah This dude is only in front cuz his rhymes lead.... to failure ^nice You trying to be something you're not, we know your faking the funk That's why I "crush you in my sleep" like fat guys on the top bunk ^wasnt feeling it You couldn't win in this battle if there was d/r voting Trife you couldn't get a hot sig (cig) if you took up smoking (wtf "taking a leap") ^not feeling that at all someone musta "pulled the cotton over your eyes" cuz after reading ya sig It's clear you must be blinded "like your fitted's too big" ^decent You will never have the "lead" in this "play" on words The only time "you do something" with words is when you use "verbs" (verbs are doing words) ^nice You can't beat me Trife, ya words are pure fiction. ^blah This aint a bragging tourny, you gotta work on ya dissin The only reason ya rhymes are "def" is cuz no-one listening ^alright finish overall i gotta go with Trife on this...had better punches and nice flow to go cam had some highlights in his verse but not enough trife was more consistent |
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word. although Cameron you have elevated immensely since you first started...keep at it |
Triflin wins 2-1
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