Alright New Rules..
8-20 LINE Maximum
Check Ins : TUESDAY
Verses By : THURSDAY
No Biting, D/R, Recycling of Any Kind..

checking in, good luck in the battle and les see who will win this one. Verses due in by thursday........................................

In, Likewise Homie............................................. .................................................. .............................................

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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife!

Wickedness is spilled and left there for Cameron to absorb
If defeat was a cure, then its obvious you’ll never be ill on this board
Fill in this Void, Votes are coming up short like midgets in abortion clinics
Critics? This is fence text, The way I look at your rhymes and Picket..
Rip threw you spirits I don’t understand your point so I’m missing the view
Trifes executes flows of an epidemic that doctors wouldn’t pursue
You’re a waste slut, like hookers your verse is used and aged much
Split acres and build crops enslave Cameron, battle locked and chained up
Extract of egg yolks the way I beat you, and batter this fool
I’ll salvage your crew, and treat you like waste and dispose of you 2
If text is a skill you’ve developed then by god help us all from ruining our eyes
No one wants to read you pre-writs Cameron, we can read between your lines.

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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife!

Trife's job is to relieve "stress" in guys pants like a homosexual tailor
This dude is only in front cuz his rhymes lead.... to failure
You trying to be something you're not, we know your faking the funk
That's why I "crush you in my sleep" like fat guys on the top bunk
You couldn't win in this battle if there was d/r voting
Trife you couldn't get a hot sig (cig) if you took up smoking (wtf "taking a leap")
someone musta "pulled the cotton over your eyes" cuz after reading ya sig
It's clear you must be blinded "like your fitted's too big"
You will never have the "lead" in this "play" on words
The only time "you do something" with words is when you use "verbs" (verbs are doing words)
You can't beat me Trife, ya words are pure fiction.
This aint a bragging tourny, you gotta work on ya dissin
The only reason ya rhymes are "def" is cuz no-one listening

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I"ve Been Nice..I took a Leap Into My Career and Made it in one Step -Trife!

neither really had the best punches. Trife had a better flow(what was the deal with fence text? you picket? I get picket fence but that line really doesnt make sense)and metas but cameron had better creativity and wordplay and he had PERSONALS!!!

cameron gets this one

vote=Cameronj86

Wickedness is spilled and left there for Cameron to absorb
If defeat was a cure, then its obvious you’ll never be ill on this board
^reasonable opener
Fill in this Void, Votes are coming up short like midgets in abortion clinics
played^
Critics? This is fence text, The way I look at your rhymes and Picket..
decent wordplay alright punch^
Rip threw you spirits I don’t understand your point so I’m missing the view
Trifes executes flows of an epidemic that doctors wouldn’t pursue
^not really feelin that
You’re a waste slut, like hookers your verse is used and aged much
^played hooker shit
Split acres and build crops enslave Cameron, battle locked and chained up
^hmmmm
Extract of egg yolks the way I beat you, and batter this fool
^good
I’ll salvage your crew, and treat you like waste and dispose of you 2
^alright
If text is a skill you’ve developed then by god help us all from ruining our eyes
No one wants to read you pre-writs Cameron, we can read between your lines
^decent finisher

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Camerons verse....

Trife's job is to relieve "stress" in guys pants like a homosexual tailor
^played....blah
This dude is only in front cuz his rhymes lead.... to failure
^nice
You trying to be something you're not, we know your faking the funk
That's why I "crush you in my sleep" like fat guys on the top bunk
^wasnt feeling it
You couldn't win in this battle if there was d/r voting
Trife you couldn't get a hot sig (cig) if you took up smoking (wtf "taking a leap")
^not feeling that at all
someone musta "pulled the cotton over your eyes" cuz after reading ya sig
It's clear you must be blinded "like your fitted's too big"
^decent
You will never have the "lead" in this "play" on words
The only time "you do something" with words is when you use "verbs" (verbs are doing words)
^nice
You can't beat me Trife, ya words are pure fiction.
^blah
This aint a bragging tourny, you gotta work on ya dissin
The only reason ya rhymes are "def" is cuz no-one listening
^alright finish


overall i gotta go with Trife on this...had better punches and nice flow to go
cam had some highlights in his verse but not enough
trife was more consistent

word. although Cameron you have elevated immensely since you first started...keep at it