Dying To Live(voice your opinion)
 

yeah yeah yeah chekc this shizz out


its hot

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4463425

there u go




i'll leave feedback if you leave links




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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234917
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234951

flow and all that is strate.......feelin da story fam....yo but fo real dat hook is sick man.....really fits da beat well....yep and as usual in past tense style it's Way too short...........

well man nice half track..lol..

pz

~1~

s/c it bro .

thanks for the feed man

but for real.........

its soundclicked now

omg fuckin god! this is some ill ass true hip hop dude, I like what you did with this. Great storyline dude, I love it....the flow is fuckin straight out on lock. the hook is so catchy, nice job with that. To bad it wasn't more rappin, kinda looked forward to it lol. Oh well there's always time for them listen to the beat tracks on cd's. Have a deadly verse then play off the beat with dj shit in it. Word though tracks dope. p.s remember to get that verse done for hold you down...rtf here please man: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235210

alright i'mma return ya'lls feed soon

uppin in this bizznitch

i'm uppin one more time

and then i'll rtf

uppin again for all my real hip hop heads

i dunno if i like the beat that much...just not really my type of beat...

your SS's are kinda loud...maybe the EQ on the track...

your delivery of course is nice.......the story is pretty nice...i think it woulda been nicer had u put in another verse for us to listen to...maybe added a lil more to the story instead of ending it so abruptly........overall not bad..not much i can pick out with 1 verse.......it was a nice listen...nothin i would DL and bump in the whip tons or anything..but it was nice....keep it up....

o and RTF please on Whatever You Want with Me, Trip, and black magik

I know i'll prob lay get bitched at but i'm upping this right hurr

Its received a lot of local buzz.

Yo....I like this shit man

Only thing I didn't like was how you let the beat ride out for what seemed like forever at the end. I was waiting for another verse too.....lol

Good shit though man.....I'm feeling it man :thumbup:

listenin...

damn i couldnt pull this beat off...your voice goes good wit it tho...nice story...good lyrics and flow of c ourse....wow definitely wasnt expecin it to end so soon...samples at the end were nice tho...just needs more develo[ped story, 1 verse aint enough lol...nice shyt tho

rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242282