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Old 09-14-06, 06:32 PM   #1
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If Life Were Like That(featuring My Boi Fresh)hott Shitt Deep Joint !!!ill Message!!!

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Old 09-14-06, 07:56 PM   #2
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com on sleepers tis is fucked....hit this shit
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Old 09-14-06, 08:37 PM   #3
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THis is pretty cool

Flow is good.......quality is good......emotion is good I like the lyrics thats some real stuff

Def. somthin too listen too i'm likin it

Hook is good......

not too bad of a song

beat is iono too fruity loopy
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Old 09-14-06, 08:42 PM   #4
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werd preciate tha feed back ill return tha favour gott any thing in mind//
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Old 09-14-06, 09:55 PM   #5
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beats ok, not too bad, somthing i would consider using easy to get deep like wha!

vocals drop in, very simple lyrics and content in this, flow is on,quality is decent, first verse is ok, coulda got a bit more tech with and and dropped some thought provoking metaphores in it but yeh........

hooks cool, up'd the emotion brongs attention back to the song.lol

second verse is ok, again guy comes through simple, nothing tech or thought provoking, its some what clech'e while still holding it down decent enough.

overall its a cool track, personaly i would'a added some more meta's to get cunts thinking, but stay stay doing you.
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Old 09-15-06, 01:30 AM   #6
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Old 09-15-06, 07:30 AM   #7
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Sup this was nice,.. decent intro !! nice beat,.. you flowed well on the mic
good quality..

I liked this, stay up fams

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Old 09-15-06, 11:13 AM   #8
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word homie. You know this shit tight. yeaaa....... like this shit. keep it poppin' yo. worddd tight shit
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Old 09-15-06, 01:52 PM   #9
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Old 09-15-06, 06:45 PM   #10
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Old 09-17-06, 09:25 AM   #11
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Beat's Nice. Something I Would Def Use.

Vocals - You Remind me of Eminem A little, with a deeper voice, in the beggining, the lyrics and content is pretty simple, but it's still pretty nice and deep for what it is. Could of added a little more though.

Hook - I love the chorus...def sounds like something that I would bump if I was in the mood.

Vocals 2 - I like the presense, and flow and delivery is pretty cool, brings a different style to the song. Which is always pretty cool. Nothing really bad, just a little simple but this is a deep track so that doesn't really effect it all to much, if it's got enough emotion. And this does.

overall, it's pretty nice... about an 8/10

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