Problem Child vs GêÑ触§
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-02-05 at 12:06 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

GêÑ触§ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:37 AM.

Problem Child, u can't withstand my punches like Tyson's recent form
yo' umbrella can't save u as rhymes rain down like a raging storm
i ain't letting go of tha mic; i keep my arm strong like Louis
u scared of me like i was Hitler & u was Jewish
i'm so heavy, my shadow comes in 3-D
leave yo' in shock with yo' face blue like a scene at tha PD
i stop yo' 'embryonic' rhymes from maturing like an abortion
man, whoever said i was this good wasn't blowing shit out of proportion!

Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-05 11:40 AM.

Yo imma true~Nigga~so yes thats meanz imma have
2 murda this fuckin~WIGGA~//Listen imma rip u like a
paper from a~NOTEBOOK~like when u step up 2 tha plate u have 2~CHOKE~UP~//i don't even have 2
~SLAY~ya verse like a lil kid im jus gonna play wit~WORDS~u gonna love me when im finished wit
~YOU~u might az well go 2 tha gay~NUDE~//im gonna kill ya~BITCH~so yes thats meanz imma have 2 hit tha
~MAJOR~SWITCH~//my ryhmes will eat u up like lil~MAGGOTS~sum 1 drop tha soap fo dis internet~FAGGOT~//

Voted For: GêÑ触§

v/Genesis

I thought he had better punchlines and original material

Problem child- Good but i wasn't getting your lyrics and they didn't hit as hard as Genesis

wtf damn we need votes uppiiiin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: GêÑ触§

you got him with all the rhymes and the word play
he was too...sudden about what he was going to say(ex. lines 5 to 8)

iight im 0-2 bitches keep tha damn votes kumin uppinnnnnn

need fuckin votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !! :banghead:

when does the voting end ike after how many votes or days does it close?

i think when u get 5 votes thats when u win p.s upppinn need votes :shoot:

upinn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!fo vote plz!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for GêÑ触§
 

just checkin pollz man both were good but not too sound better but ya'll need better metaz and child i told ya fix ya structure people get lost readin ya shit and we lose interest man real.....

Voted For: GêÑ触§

Problem ur structure and flow sucked major ass and really ur punches were newbish, try not to talk about gay, sex, moms, or guns man u need to be creative, read some battle to fix ur structure..Gen u messed up ur structure in the middle but u had good punches which gave u the win...V/Gen for better punches and structure