[rate]~Life's A Bitch~[rate]
This how I'm feeling right now...If you feel the same way, leave me some feed...thanx
..I'm tired-of-struggling, tired of always rhyming-and-hustling.. ..I'm sick-of-life, and I think-its-time, for my eyes-to-be-shutting.. ..I'm tired of caps-and-slugs, grab-and-runs, acting-tough.. ..And I'm sick of the world, that made me resort back-to-drugs.. ..I'm tired of slanging-bricks, chasing-kids, for their eighty-cents.. ..Tired of not-being-stable, and not-being-able, to pay-the-rent.. ..Sick-of-the-pain, tired of thunder, sick-of-the-rain.. ..Sick-of-cocaine, tired of thinking this-is-a-game.. ..Tired of slitting-my-veins, but the knife-isnt-help.. ..Sick of hiding-from-belts, why must I live my life-in-this-hell?.. ..Tired-of-family, tired of friends not being there-for-me.. ..Bouncing around like trampolines, and working at Dairy-Queen.. ..I'm sick-of-women, and sick of having to play tricks-to-get-em.. ..I'm sick of these trick-friendships, and girls who wont quit-bitchin.. ..I'm tired-of-stress, tried-my-best, but life-is-a-mess.. ..Too bad I can't start all over, and try-it-again... Lookin for maybe 2 cats to get on the remix to this...hit me up if u interested...SERIOUS RESPONSES ONLY!!! IF YOU'RE NOT GONNA DO IT, DONT WASTE MY TIME!!!! anywayz...leave me some feed on this...I will return the favor...Thanx...1 |
yo...someone gonna leave me some feed or what?? Jesus...come on yall...uppin this bitch
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uppin this fucker!!
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yo man...that is some dope shit...nice flow, word play, and structure was good...8/10...keep that shit comin
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no doubt dawg...thanx for the feed...uppin for more...1
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Yeah man nice verse a lot of emotion and some decent
wordplay could have uped the vocab... How can a 14 year old relate to all this ? Is this real or just a topical drop. |
alot of this is real man...I threw in a few lines for a topical...but alot of it is real
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by the way, thanx for the feed...uppin this bitch!
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ay Black~Magik that was hella tight 7/10 the word play was good and thats just tight cuz tha words are so true, really good word play
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thanx man...glad u felt it...uppin for more feed...come on yall quit sleepin on this fuckin thing!! 1
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thats some ill shyt man nice flows and topic 8/10 keep em comin bro im new to this shyt but hit me with some feed mang
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583 |
aight I'll hit it up...thanx for the feed man...uppin this fucker!!!!!!!
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yo this was fire mang...
multis was good, flow was good, all around shit was just TIGHT mang..... 9.0 outta 10..... fire... |
wow...thanx dawg...glad yall like it...uppin...1
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Yea This Shit Was On Point.. On The Real.. Good Job ON This..
nothin you gotta work on either.. return the favor with a vote? hit my sig.. |
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