$ike vs Keln WiTz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-14-05 at 01:33 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

$ike has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 01:34 PM.

Keln WiTz has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-13-05 01:50 PM.

im gonig for the kill and my trap is set
i know your wack and you havnt even rapped yet

I wont hit you ill give you a nudge
But you still be uglier than that girl from the grudge

I’m killing people like you from coast to coast
Running to Mexico with a pale look like a ghost

I wouldn’t be surprised if after this battle he quits
No one will ever recognize the name keln witz

Im something like a noun hit like a verb
This battle is over with this wack ass herb

Im done rapping im through
You so done you mom regrets having you

A quickie...


Turning the tables in this battle...only if he moved out of his mom's basement... *
Going to a retard class... is the only way he gets special placement.
This is like "Back to the Future", because your ryhmes are in the past...
This dude here couldn't get signed if he was wearing a cast!
The only way you're top of the food chain is by standing ontop of Burger King.
Even if he was messing around at a playground, he couldn't throw a swing.
In this battle you're runner-up, like children going up hills.
If $ikewas at Mc-Donalds...the dude would be a kiddie meal.
Call Sike a 'pioneer' of hip hop - he'll drop dead-
That's the day I drop 'Plymouth Rock' on this cock's head...

* Turning tables...moving furniture...moving out...yeah.

A quickie...


Turning the tables in this battle...only if he moved out of his mom's basement... *
Going to a retard class... is the only way he gets special placement.
This is like "Back to the Future", because your ryhmes are in the past...
This dude here couldn't get signed if he was wearing a cast!
The only way you're top of the food chain is by standing ontop of Burger King.
Even if he was messing around at a playground, he couldn't throw a swing.
In this battle you're runner-up, like children going up hills.
If $ikewas at Mc-Donalds...the dude would be a kiddie meal.
Call Sike a 'pioneer' of hip hop - he'll drop dead-
That's the day I drop 'Plymouth Rock' on this cock's head...

* Turning tables...moving furniture...moving out...yeah.

This was feedback posted for $ike
 

checkin the pollz ..........

Come on...let's get some votes. Or little leprechauns shall rape you.

'wit a little bumpity bump on the side of bump bump.

This was feedback posted for Keln WiTz
 

Not enough posts to vote, but I'm gonna have to give this one to Keln. $ike just didn't do it for me. Couldn't get signed if he wore a cast was nice. I dont know what "Im somethin like a noun hit like a verb" means at all.

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Come on, dudes...We need some of the voting up in hiere.

I finally got enough posts to vote but it says I cant vote. Keln gets my vote, its unofficial but you gotta hear it.



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>< Come the hell on, people. Let's get voting so I can win.

Voted For: Keln WiTz

this was an 1-sided battle all the way out 2 me:
opener: k w
vocab: k w
structure: $ike
punches: k w
closer: k w
kw in this battle gets my vote cuz he hit wit harder punches then $ike did & his verse came harder did his; $ike u need 2 elevate in ur wordplay no hating
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Keln WiTz

STYLE:
similar styles here. weak finishes.

PUNCH:
Keln, good punches, "back to the future... wearing a cast" was decent, so was the kiddie meal deal.
$ike, good try on the personal with Keln's name, "with a pale look like a ghost" - by this u mean you or him?... yeh tahts right, PUNCH HIM

FLOW:
i felt something here... could use a little diversity

TECHNIQUE:
good reference to Grudge, good metaphor on Food Chains, up ur vocabs, and work on a better closer

S: $ike > Keln WiTz
P: Keln WiTz > $ike
F: Keln WiTz > $ike
T: Keln WiTz > $ike (slightly)
OVERALL: decent punches, decent flow, work on makin this shit more intense and uve both got a set of wheels (to go places ha)
VOTE: Keln WiTz