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Tha_Produca 04-24-03 08:05 PM

"AIDS NEVER DIES"~Deep track~Drop Links~
 
Yo aids something tru and serious
it'll turn the toughest people to babies and delerious
how can you rap about gold
when millions can't grow old
it came from a monkey
or did it?
maybe the government did it?
and they just to pussy to admit it
i'm afraid they scared grave diggin'
now you gotta wrap it up when you dick stickin'
then you hear the news that your brotha got it
it was like some thug just shot em'
but a little worst
cause when he walks the street he was belittled and cursed
he might as well have been in da hurst
no, its not fair its got you like murder its out there
now young females are out scared
that if they kiss a dude they'll get it too
so little facts about a diesease
a billion will die before they find out these things
Still only the family cries for they god son
and no one gave a fuck before magic johnson
so who will give a fuck when comes to you
will you accept and die
or pass it on like hot soup
Then they kill Saddam and drop bombs on him
when they should be fixing condoms
if they would educate the kids today
maybe in twenty years we won't live this way
and they said it was just for the gays why don't you ask N.W.A.
but ever since the sixties poeple have suffered
suffered just like in Nam and just like my brotha
lying in a concerete room full of screams
life isn't always what it seems
maybe not to you in front of screens
but out there on the scence
up down and up again of "shit it broke"
and those were the final words he spoke
Aids are worse then the crack you smoke
or fat people havin' heart attack and strokes
its a different thing with a different feelin'
casue billions of peopel its still killin'



TRYIN' TO RAISE AWARENESS

Bash 04-24-03 08:07 PM

this drop was aight , i was kind of feelin it , , return tha favour and give me some feedback on my first drop here http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41388

Accelerate 04-24-03 09:24 PM

i liked this piece, it was a topic I could feel, but my suggestion is you need a lil more work on wordplay and you need to paint more of an image
check out my pieces
Nothing
Something(nothing p.2)
and All I Have

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WORD~PERFECT 04-24-03 10:31 PM

i liked this needs some work but what doesnt tight drop

Av1r3x 04-24-03 11:38 PM

good meaddage but ya needa expand ya bars or sumthin.I feel where u comin from tho.Check my piece "Notha Day in Tha Life." Stay ^
-Avi


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