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04-24-03, 08:05 PM | #1 | ||||||
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"AIDS NEVER DIES"~Deep track~Drop Links~
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Yo aids something tru and serious
it'll turn the toughest people to babies and delerious how can you rap about gold when millions can't grow old it came from a monkey or did it? maybe the government did it? and they just to pussy to admit it i'm afraid they scared grave diggin' now you gotta wrap it up when you dick stickin' then you hear the news that your brotha got it it was like some thug just shot em' but a little worst cause when he walks the street he was belittled and cursed he might as well have been in da hurst no, its not fair its got you like murder its out there now young females are out scared that if they kiss a dude they'll get it too so little facts about a diesease a billion will die before they find out these things Still only the family cries for they god son and no one gave a fuck before magic johnson so who will give a fuck when comes to you will you accept and die or pass it on like hot soup Then they kill Saddam and drop bombs on him when they should be fixing condoms if they would educate the kids today maybe in twenty years we won't live this way and they said it was just for the gays why don't you ask N.W.A. but ever since the sixties poeple have suffered suffered just like in Nam and just like my brotha lying in a concerete room full of screams life isn't always what it seems maybe not to you in front of screens but out there on the scence up down and up again of "shit it broke" and those were the final words he spoke Aids are worse then the crack you smoke or fat people havin' heart attack and strokes its a different thing with a different feelin' casue billions of peopel its still killin' TRYIN' TO RAISE AWARENESS |
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04-24-03, 08:07 PM | #2 | |||||||
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this drop was aight , i was kind of feelin it , , return tha favour and give me some feedback on my first drop here http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41388
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04-24-03, 09:24 PM | #3 | ||||
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i liked this piece, it was a topic I could feel, but my suggestion is you need a lil more work on wordplay and you need to paint more of an image
check out my pieces Nothing Something(nothing p.2) and All I Have 1
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04-24-03, 10:31 PM | #4 | ||||||
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i liked this needs some work but what doesnt tight drop
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04-24-03, 11:38 PM | #5 | ||||||
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good meaddage but ya needa expand ya bars or sumthin.I feel where u comin from tho.Check my piece "Notha Day in Tha Life." Stay ^
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