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36 Bar Freestyle
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FEED 2 THIS IS JUST A THROWAWAY VERSE, THE SATANIC AND DEMONIC SHIT SOUND TOO MUCH LIKE EM FOR ME TO DO ANYTHING WITT IT, LIKE HE HAS RHYMED 'OUIJA BOARDS' WITH 'BEACH RESORTS' BEFORE AND SAID 'PULL YOU APART FROM BOTH ANGLES' ON THE SLIM SHADY EP, EXC... IT'S STILL DOPE AS FUCK THOUGH CHECK IT OUT. {Verse} I raise mayhem; camp at haunted beach resorts Spark a tiki tortch, talk to ouija boards and praise Satan Raid an alien invation in a space station Exchange brains with an ape and trade veigns with an aids patient Take patience, stay in your place before I break ya legs In 8 places and use the pavement to scrape ya face I'm for warning yall; I'm lookin for an excuse To tie this noose around your neck, and toss you off of the roof And if it's loose than you still got a fourty story fall Outlined in chalk, with your brains over the side walk Lacin tracks, wavin gats while I'm pasin back Make a razor gash and slash your face in a Jason mask Axe maniac get your cranium cracked Hack your legs and have your brains leak outa your veigns Chain you from both ankels and hang you from coat hangers Drive a steak through your heart; and break you apart from both angles Strangle your throat, the most painful part's when your toes dangle Shank you with razor sharp blades that are state of the art Playin a part in the five sequences of death Step one, seap his breath so it aint leakin out his chest Step two is your life flashin in fast foward While the hack saw wacks your neck till your heads half off Part three's a crash course, chop up your body with a sword So they can't I.D. you till the atopsy at the morgue Chapter four, a latteral pull will shatter your skull Batter a hole in your chest, reach in and capture your soul And lesson five... Mount you on the cross Then I fry your corpse, sacrafise your life to a higher force Fuck remorce, drop your body off in front of The Source Let 'em write about that, what you like about that I'm halocausted with sin; I'm Lucifer's kid With a crusifix pinned to my ribbs and a cross drawn on my skin Releasin a demon, and I'll be ceasin your breathin So you'll be leavin this evenin recieven a meetin with Jesus Reducen evolution and producen death's conclution When I send you to your execution through electrocution |
Reminds me of Marshall 'fore he went all "Ass Like That" on us.
Good job! :thumbup: 8.5/10 |
Haha, yea...i'm feeling this drop. It seems you caught on later on in the verse.
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-personally my favorite two lines out the verse. Keep it up kid. |
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THATS WEAK ASS FEED BUT EXACTLY WHY I AINT RELEASIN THIS VERSE, SOUND TOO MUCH LIKE OLD SLIM BUT ITS STILL TOO NICE NOT TO DROP IN OM. |
^Lmao.. you can't even drop it in OM.. so don't try. And it won't even all that nice so, yea.....
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^ THIS WAS ALREADY MOVED TO THE FREESTYLE SECTION... & I PEEPED SOME OF YA DROPS, I AINT EVEN GON' RUN MY FINGERS ON MY KEYBOARD AND TYPE OF BUNCH OF GARBAGE & POP SHIT OVER THE NET. SO DON'T TAKE IT PERSONAL WHEN I SAY YOUR SKILL LEVEL HAS NO BUSINESS CRITICIZING EVEN MY WACKEST PIECE, THATS LIKE A TIRD MAKEN FUN OF A SUNSET... lol & IM NOT COCKY AT ALL, I JUST THOUGHT ITS SIMPLE LOGIC IF SOMEONE GON' HATE THEY SHOULD HAVE THE TALENT TO BACK IT UP. 'PRECIATE YOU UPPIN IT FOR ME THOUGH SON.
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Wow you seen my OM's.. wowzers.
I don't text no more.. muthafuckin text freestyle, lmao. -_- Garbage. |
DID THIS MUHFUCKA JUST SAY WOWZERS? lol DA FUCK?... WASNT NO TEXT FREESTYLE HOMEBOI, THATS CALLED A 'KEYSTYLE' I AINT GOT A MIC SO ALL MY SHITS IS RECORDED ON ONE OF THEM LIL HAND HELD TAPE RECORDER JOINTS AND TYPED UP WORD FOR WORD. ANY CAT CAN SPEND DAYS ON A RAP AND DEN CLAIM ITS A FREESTYLE IF HE DROP THE LYRICS ON A BOARD SO YALL GON BELIEVE WHATCHU WANT... BUT WITH THE EXCEPTION OF THE OPENING LINE THIS WHOLE PIECE WAS OFF THE TOP.
BUT I AINT TRYIN TO HAVE NO NET BEEF, DO YOU DAWG STAY UP... & KEEP YA ASS IN THE AUDIO SECTION IF YOU LOOK DOWN UPON TEXT SPITS SO MUCH. |
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he trying to sound kewl...check the diss the person above u cypher...he aint as ill as he makes himself to be... any ways it was a good verse...I like the fact u understand ur shit sounds too much like slim....a lot of other mu fuckaz would be like" no fuck u...thats my style..." so get on this shit...I aint never seen nothering else from u. |
^ Word I Seen That Fagit All Over The Cypher Section And He Talkin Bout He 'don't Text No More'.. Wether You Postin Audios Or Lyrics Either Way You Still Postin On The Net, You Aint Above Or Below The Next Mc, Some Muhfuckas Just Dont Have Access To A Mic...
Anyways Good Look On The Feed, Chea Ill Be The First To Admit This Sounds Like Old Em..anybody Whos Heard The Audio Doesnt Make The Connection Though Cause My Voice Sounds Nottin Like Slim And I Aint Tryin To. But My Style And Wordplay Is Similar So When I Get On Some Evil Sick & Twisted Shit Its Obviously Gon Get Compared To Em Unless I Was Forced To Dumb It Down. |
nah fuck that shit dawg...do wat u do....if ur audio sounds tight it sounds tight...when u worry about satisfying every one....u leave ur self unsatified...I coped that off a fortune cookie man...lol.....It really aint that it sounds like Em..its just that em has...sorry...had a surtain style wit syllable rhymin like Rakim and Big pun....only that his shit is kinda slowed down enough for u to be able to understand and rap along wit wat he said....thats wat make a good lyrical song catchy....
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^ Exactly, I Developed My Style Witt The Influences Of Some Old Em, Along Witt Royce And Pun Mostly Dem Cats Who Do Syllable Rhymin. The Faster Ya Flow Is Combined Witt Mad Syllabls The More Confusing It Is To The Ears Maken It Sound Mind Boggeling. I Save My Extremely Lyrical Shit Like That Just For Mixtape Verses. My Album Shit Is Slowed Down A Lil Bit To Make It More Catchy.
& I Feel You I Aint Tryin To Satisfy Anyone, But At The Same Time I Have Them Business Smarts, Im Tryin To Make It, Im Aimin For The Top.. Whats The Point In Spittin If You Dont Wanna Be The Best You Nahmean.. And Someone Rappin About Some Shit That Anotha Mc Has Already Done Aint Gon Get The Attention Or Recognition It Might Deserve Cause The Fans Have Heard It Before. Theres Some Wack Ass Underground Cats Who Maken Moves And Gettin On Just Because They Unique, If You Combine That And Still Find A Way To Be Just As Lyrical You Gon Get Alot More Exposure. |
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First of all.. why you on my nuts AGAIN!?.. And second if you trying in 'diss above you cypher' your fuckin pathetic. Why would anyone even try hard in a fuckin cypher?? Hop off my nuts nigga, you wack. Both. |
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lol KEEP POPPIN SHIT ON YA KEYBOARD DAWG, YOU NOT THE STREETS YOUS THE DESK...DUDE TRYIN TO USE THE 'I WASNT EVEN TRYING!' EXCUSE TO COVER FOR HIS PATHETIC ASS LYRICS. JUST LEAVE IT ALONE B YOU MAKEN YASELF LOOK LIKE AN ASS, THANKS FOR THE UP AGAIN THOUGH HOMIE. |
lol............................
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