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Rob and Kill(Collabo...feedback needed)
This was a collabo wit me and Will Nova he's in blue and I'm in Red...nuff said....I need feedback....peaceezy......
Who is this punk I see chillin wit his homies Lookin real nice got the chain and tha rollies, I just can't believe this nigga got more than me But i got somethin fo that ass...well more than STD's, I'ma roll up on this nigga soon as his boys jet Let me get the Balaclava and the right mind set, Yes yes his boys are up and gone It's just a matter of time now....hope it won't be long, Now i see him walkin slowly toward a bar Nows the time to get him....if i can start the car, Ok I see he stopped let me get up real close Dudes gettin all froggy...now I'll teach him to croak, He shouldn't of spoke soon as I stepped out my whip Playa got all smart yelled for help and then dipped, I'm hot in pursuit..like a fox in a chase Soon as I catch this nigga...I'm shreddin his face, Ain't no if ands or buts...damn this nigga tripped Fell down on hit his head and busted his lip, Oh well should paid more attention Now he'll be payin thru the Def by Mouf pension, Damn, they say the only good witness is a dead one Knife is all I got....fuckin forgot my gun One flick of the wrist and *boom*, this jobs done.... holdin down my block, my fam loiter the 2-4// brute force, bordered by more souls than shoe stores// who bored? cause I'mma get mine a hotta way// sellin everything from trees to snow fo the holidaes// talk 'bout privacy, 89' Ac was well aware// holdin a bigger mug than Disney souvieners// but I ignored the care, continued wit my grind// evenin time, count the tithes, lets relax the mind// Chardeney wine wit L's the size of candy bars// beat bangin hard, game starts to slip take her panties off// a nigga tryna stand me off, look sorta familiar// told my bois to get 'em, this nigga refused to surrenda// tryna get my attention he was so consistant// drunk and twisted, fo fightin I was uncinditioned// my head was spinnin, stumblin and fell to my face// cement I embrace, I felt a knee dig in my waist// Now an altered pace, blood runnin down my arms// heart so rapid wit an incision below my palm// |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167746
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=167494 my links if anymore are needed then......i dunno what to say...guess i'll go get some then.....anyways....feedback plz. |
this is a good drop, topic is a little bit played. But apart from that I liked it.keep dropping.
good looking with the link's. |
MAdd luv Def, I like that one.... keep look out fo future references. Nova, One
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that was dope...i never saw n e one do n e thing like that before....2 sides of a story...big ups y'all...i liked Def by Mouf's part best...
"Damn, they say the only good witness is a dead one Knife is all I got....fuckin forgot my gun One flick of the wrist and *boom*, this jobs done...." that was dope |
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i liked ur point of view better too...better 2 kill than be killed haha |
this was a cool drop..both verses were good to me..overall nice collab
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uppin this feedback plz leave some I need elevation.....
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upping for feed....c'mon share the knowledge peeps everyone could use elevation...no one is perfect....
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uppin once again for feed...anybody.....c'mon leave a link and I'll get at urs..
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C'mon peeps....i need feed.....c'mon.....
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How many times do i have to up this to get feed.....?!?!?!?!?!?!.........GIVE ME SOME DAMN FEEDBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........GEEZ MAN....WTF?....somebody takes the time out to make an Open mic and can't even geet feedback on it....BULLSHIT.....give me feedback.....FUCK!!!!
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this was a coo drop...i liked both verses...i didn't too much like the topic tho...it's a little played but this was a nice collab you did wit the topic...8/10
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thank you..finally someone posting feedback...i thought i was alone talkin to myself for a second there....uppin..
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this is the last time i upp this shit....I'll just make a new one or somethin..peaceezy
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