jaktheripherbs Vs riff raff
10 lines max
spit whenever regular voting rules no crew hate or dr votes |
when i spit hot verses is the only time he smokes...
ur mom points and laughs at u and i hate ppl who laugh at their own jokes... u newb virgin rapper u dont want war wit jak... b4 u elevate i can walk to india stores and back... this whore gets smacked,good barz of fire... u aint battled once but yet u should still retire... |
Checking In, Already Got My Stuff Together
But You Did Say You"d Spit First,so Hit Me |
I Cant Belive You Went And Got All Personal...
U Wernt That Bitchey In Our Offline Rehersal.. Dont Be Suprised That Ive Just Flipped A Reversal... I Rid Of Wankstains Like You Better Than Persil... Sureley, You Could Of Give A Better Crack Than That ... ."u Newb Virgin Rapper U Dont Want War With Jack ... Ill Do To U, What America Did To Iraq... Bomb You To Fuck , Look Kid U Whack |
i hope all my future battles wont be as easy as that
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I Give This One To Riff Raff His Punches Were Better.
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hahaha uppin over this verse feeding bitch u took like a half hour to write yours i took like fifteen minutes yet all u did was feed off my verse well i guess u got to feed the ones in need
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ha ha ha, that little bite was funny than the verse you wrote
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uppin i didnt understand what u meant right there but seriously if we got some real vets that know battles and know what type of verse wins a battle u wouldnt have got that vote from that biting herb
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dis was a good battle...
jackfree...came week wid punches....flow was basic...structure was basic.....wordplay was v v basic.....personals were week..overall..3/10..you made no effort atall..... riff~raf...punches were ok...flow was there...structure was basic.....personals were week....wordplay was nice....overall 7/10....... keep it up both of u.....aaaaiiggghhttt!!!! v/ Riff Raf PLEASE LEAVE A HONEST VOTE ON DIS PLZ: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=115323&page=2 |
get the fuck out do u even know what word play is cuz if u claim u do u r a liar cuz that mutherfucker didnt have wordplay at all his verse was played as can be bomb u like america did iraq" thats like a 99 concept right there bombing anyone in battles is wack IMA GET A REAL VOTER IN HERE
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hmmm...........too short for my comfort.....I couldn't even get a real taste of your styles.............but from what I read....riff raff verse had better flow...but your verse got weak at the end.......Jack....your verse seemed like you was serious enough........I give your verse a 2.5/10..........riff-raff.....you get a 4/10.........Jack.....just take the criticsm and keep elevating.......cause the object is to get respect, and get betted........this is my honest vote...I would have written more, but the battle is kinda short...................
-out Oh yeah....Stopped the Sleepin.........Don't ask for votes if you ain't going to vote...... -out |
fucking hell r u still bitching........ look its clear youve been beat. so retreat from your computer seat
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