10 lines max
spit whenever
regular voting rules no crew hate or dr votes

when i spit hot verses is the only time he smokes...
ur mom points and laughs at u
and i hate ppl who laugh at their own jokes...
u newb virgin rapper u dont want war wit jak...
b4 u elevate i can walk to india stores and back...
this whore gets smacked,good barz of fire...
u aint battled once but yet u should still retire...

Checking In, Already Got My Stuff Together
But You Did Say You"d Spit First,so Hit Me

I Cant Belive You Went And Got All Personal...
U Wernt That Bitchey In Our Offline Rehersal..
Dont Be Suprised That Ive Just Flipped A Reversal...
I Rid Of Wankstains Like You Better Than Persil...
Sureley, You Could Of Give A Better Crack Than That ... ."u Newb Virgin Rapper U Dont Want War With Jack ...
Ill Do To U, What America Did To Iraq...
Bomb You To Fuck , Look Kid U Whack

i hope all my future battles wont be as easy as that

I Give This One To Riff Raff His Punches Were Better.

hahaha uppin over this verse feeding bitch u took like a half hour to write yours i took like fifteen minutes yet all u did was feed off my verse well i guess u got to feed the ones in need

ha ha ha, that little bite was funny than the verse you wrote

uppin i didnt understand what u meant right there but seriously if we got some real vets that know battles and know what type of verse wins a battle u wouldnt have got that vote from that biting herb

dis was a good battle...
jackfree...came week wid punches....flow was basic...structure was basic.....wordplay was v v basic.....personals were week..overall..3/10..you made no effort atall.....
riff~raf...punches were ok...flow was there...structure was basic.....personals were week....wordplay was nice....overall 7/10.......
keep it up both of u.....aaaaiiggghhttt!!!!
v/ Riff Raf
PLEASE LEAVE A HONEST VOTE ON DIS PLZ: http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=115323&page=2

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get the fuck out do u even know what word play is cuz if u claim u do u r a liar cuz that mutherfucker didnt have wordplay at all his verse was played as can be bomb u like america did iraq" thats like a 99 concept right there bombing anyone in battles is wack IMA GET A REAL VOTER IN HERE

hmmm...........too short for my comfort.....I couldn't even get a real taste of your styles.............but from what I read....riff raff verse had better flow...but your verse got weak at the end.......Jack....your verse seemed like you was serious enough........I give your verse a 2.5/10..........riff-raff.....you get a 4/10.........Jack.....just take the criticsm and keep elevating.......cause the object is to get respect, and get betted........this is my honest vote...I would have written more, but the battle is kinda short...................

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Oh yeah....Stopped the Sleepin.........Don't ask for votes if you ain't going to vote......

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