Stanza vs Robert De Niro
 

Battle Rules:

Crhyme Sindicate (Robert De Niro) Vs Trigger Town Inc (Stanza)


12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Usual Voters
good luck man

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-25-05 at 01:43 AM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS
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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-22-05 08:37 PM.

Yo

He "Runnin Assfault" In Jail So He Get "Passed Around" Like "Track Battonz"
How Can You "Beat Me" When You Workin With "Pussie'z" Like "Yvonne?"
You Shit Doesnt Carry "No Weight" Like You is Writting With "Light Text"
But Your Lines Still Dont "Shine" Even If You Was Rockin "Oiled "Spandex"
Two Wins? Ha Thats Not a Winning Streak Thats A Shit Stain In Rv's Draws
So Ill Clorox Your Nutz So We Wont See The Division In Your Balls (lol)

6 Lines Done Now You Got The "Shit That Runs" So Ill Call You "Lil Squirtz"
I Know You a "Pussy" Bcuz I seen Your "Stuff" When You Wore That "Skirt"
"Changing The Wheels On My Car" Is The Only Time Youll See me "Re-Tire"
Then Ill Put You In A "Skillet At a Camp Fire" So That You can Be "On-Fire"
You Week So Ill Let The Punctual Actions of my Keyboard Finish Him Like
!@!#!@!@@!#!@#!@#!@#!@@#!@##!@#!@#!!!!!! You Dyke

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-23-05 03:39 AM.

This was feedback posted for Robert De Niro
 

ayo

i say he takes it man WERD

exposed, cause stanza couldn't come sick if he had a fever
stanza could 'shit out an award' but still wouldn't be an 'achiever'
^^ was a good opener................str8 personal


slow progress cause his process of making it come's like a snail
any slower you can move back, cause his delivery slower then mail
^^......another great personal str8

stan's to much of a self glory person, you don't need medication*
you could board a plain an write your verse still would succeed in elevation
^^.....good finisher.....man WERD nuff said

VS.

nothing

sorry it was supposed ti be a vote not a feed back

Voted For: Robert De Niro

vote fo: WhAt EvEr It TaKeS

WhAt EvEr It TaKeS: u had better punches. u had an overall better verse.

Stanza: yo mang, no beef, but yo punchez n shit wuz really bad, i didnt git hardley any of them. u really gotta werk on that shit. and wtf at tha closer, !@!#!@!@@!#!@#!@#!@#!@@#!@##!@#!@#!!!!!! You Dyke, that makes me wonder i fu were even takin this battle serious or if u were just bored n just felt like fuckin around, lol.

no hate stanza, werk on yo punches. WhAt EvEr It TaKeS takes this 1, werd

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for Robert De Niro
 

rofl nice ness.................u got this easy........

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This was feedback posted for Stanza
 

exposed, cause stanza couldn't come sick if he had a fever
stanza could 'shit out an award' but still wouldn't be an 'achiever'
^^1st line hella played, 2nd line not feelin it
when i'm done, the pan'll be attach to you sort of like peter
the edge will leave stanza cut up, cause i come with e meat cleaver
^^ok
slow progress cause his process of making it come's like a snail
any slower you can move back, cause his delivery slower then mail
^^ok, not too witty
IM'ed me and said "please vote for me against nostradamus"
i promised i votes so i voted nos, well at least he lost honest
^^horrible wording
if stanza wanted to conceal his identity, he couldn't be able to
i'm like a life machine i bring him a flat line like it's fatal dude
^^no diss
stan's to much of a self glory person, you don't need medication*
you could board a plain an write your verse still would succeed in elevation
^^played concept, ok flip of it

vs.


He "Runnin Assfault" In Jail So He Get "Passed Around" Like "Track Battonz"
How Can You "Beat Me" When You Workin With "Pussie'z" Like "Yvonne?"
^^okish
You Shit Doesnt Carry "No Weight" Like You is Writting With "Light Text"
But Your Lines Still Dont "Shine" Even If You Was Rockin "Oiled "Spandex"
^^nah
Two Wins? Ha Thats Not a Winning Streak Thats A Shit Stain In Rv's Draws
So Ill Clorox Your Nutz So We Wont See The Division In Your Balls (lol)
^^don't write (lol) at your own punch, that's gay. not liking this

6 Lines Done Now You Got The "Shit That Runs" So Ill Call You "Lil Squirtz"
I Know You a "Pussy" Bcuz I seen Your "Stuff" When You Wore That "Skirt"
^^ok
"Changing The Wheels On My Car" Is The Only Time Youll See me "Re-Tire"
Then Ill Put You In A "Skillet At a Camp Fire" So That You can Be "On-Fire"
^^1st line is very played wordplay, 2nd line is ok
You Week So Ill Let The Punctual Actions of my Keyboard Finish Him Like
!@!#!@!@@!#!@#!@#!@#!@@#!@##!@#!@#!!!!!! You Dyke
^^haha, arrogant

still/vStanza, although not enough posts yet, so just feedback. Leave an honest vote on this battle:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205714

thanks

go back to rv lmao it was a personal you dumb shit that's why rv should never come to rb nuff said

i meant rb and come to rv lmao fucking ay.............

How am I supposed to know what's a personal unless it's clear from this thread, dumbass? Either way, doesn't matter, cos I can't vote. And how do you know I'm from RB?