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$Da BattLeKinG$ vs Charlie Caliber
Battle Rules:
4-6 Barz... No Biting.. No Recycling... 3-0 KO::4-1 TKO::Requires 5 Votes To Win.. Good Luck... Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 12-21-05 at 12:51 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
$Da BAttLeKinG$ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-05 12:52 PM.
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Charlie Caliber has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-20-05 05:33 PM.
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funny dudes a joker as a comic he has issues//
can't keep shit togather so he puts glue on his tissue// got love for tha game he gotta give marrage a shot// so he ends up hanging by a thread tryna tie da knot// swept tryna jump the broom no weapons except the semi// Im not Aston but i will Kutcha to get Moore like Demi// sorry don't get mad dog but u don't scracth the surface// but claims he undergorunds rap dudes like a geek......... he whack on purpose// This kinda like an armless and blind guy getin ready 2 fight// Cuz the picture in his avy is the closest thing to a punch on this site// |
You scared, I can tell...look at me, you 'Lookin at Flames' like 'Starin at Hell'
and in this battle, we see there is a 'Caliber'......but 'Where is his Shells'? You'll never be displayed in 1st place, you'll always be played, ya verse stinks just leave...when Im done, I'll be "Known Ta Shake Cali" like "Major Earthquakes" You'll get hit wit Colossus Blows, this'll teach you never to Cross a Pro learn from ya mistakes..ya cant rap, ya like "Misplaced Rivers" ya "Lost Ya Flow" Watch this Cock Get Smashed Wit Keys, til all ya Drops Get Asked Ta Leave dont run shit, only thing "Charlie's Seen Ta Be in Charge Of" is "Chocolate Factories" Clips?..I deliver it through chest, I just put an end to this frivolous dude's rep cause in this battle, "Cali Sittin On Tha Edge".....like "It Is In Tha U.S" Quit confusin it, son...Im better than you, so prepare ta lose, cause I won acceptin?..ya choose ta get sonned...I got 'Caliber Lost' like 'Losing a Gun' Uppin Fa C.C |
Oh Ok, my fault...Uppin Fa Votez Now...
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Voted For: $Da BAttLeKinG$
DaBattleking- your verse was pretty good n all...punches i thought were good too...some were a little weak but overall they were good...flow was good too n all...Some personals were good...Structure could have been better and plus less shorter lines...but overall you got this battle with punches.. Charlie Caliber- your verse was aight too...punches were okay...some were just played or weak i thought..structure was good better then his...flow good...personals didnt really see any...but overall you did welll...but not well enough man... |
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216620
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Uppin Fa Votez...
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This was feedback posted for Charlie Caliber
iight im jus checkin tha pollz but i like both these verses, nice job both of yall..holla at me G's,1
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Voted For: $Da BAttLeKinG$
Easy ass shit for Da Battle King... I dont think I even need to explain this vote... |
Voted For: $Da BAttLeKinG$
Opener: BK Closer: Caliber Punches: BK Personals: BK Creativity: BK Complexity: BK Structure: BK Enjoyment: BK Vote: BK Battleking just had the more creative harder hitting punches, with the more complex flow, and better name plays for personals... in all around just had the better battle verse in this one |
Voted For: $Da BAttLeKinG$
Charlie Caliber = Owned with a capital fucking P. |
Voted For: $Da BAttLeKinG$
vote 4 dabattleking. he has better rymes and flow and punches caliber u rymes were ok but no killer punches , u had better structure but overall battleking won this rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219800 |
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