53. Past Tense vs 54. SlicKnife
 

checkin in the muh fucka

Check in....

I have two punches, will choose one when time comes

im gonna "turn u off to beefin" like "converting u to a vegetarian"
till you start "wetting urself" like "automatic filling aquariums"

ha somthing quick

Stupid you aint really gotta post them you can just leave them gone ...

While Slic is being spoken of in the Rap Mags n Sites, without fame seeking as well//
You might JUST be lucky enough to be talked of in the…let your NAME speak for itself…! (Past Tense)

If you don't understand it, don't vote...

im gonna "turn u off to beefin" like "converting u to a vegetarian"
till you start "wetting urself" like "automatic filling aquariums"

^set was really played...and the punch could have been better.Seems like you rushed this IMO.

While Slic is being spoken of in the Rap Mags n Sites, without fame seeking as well//
You might JUST be lucky enough to be talked of in the…let your NAME speak for itself…!

^Stretched out,decent concept for a punch,worded bad...and Your style also seems awfully familar to fruad/icy-hot as well..

v/Past tense

v/past tense, even if it was played, it was better

Uh, I didn't like either. Slic's was creative, but corny. Past Tense had the concept, but stretched. Word of advice to ya, read ya punch outloud and see it flows before ya post it. I think it was better tho despite the wordiness.

Vote - Past Tense

What the fuck

Can we get some more votes in on this...

v/ past-tense only cos the punch had a bit more meaning and was a little funnier.

Slick's was a little stretched it had good wordplay but needed to be worded better. Sorry bro