freestyle shizzim
 

lol word up just a freestyle i did this morning about this girl


word up

check it out

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4814633


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scratch this

close this up :)

lol nah never lets just see some feed

i liked this, the beat was nice, and nothin wrong w/ addressin the ladies track every once in awhile, i understand it was a "freestyle" but still was a little short. Lyricly it was good, got the messege across, but was nothing lyricly amazing. The emotion came across very well, it was easy to understand how it felt, and what emotions you were trying to get out. It was mixed very well, the quality was good, and your flow was decent as well. My only complaint is that songs w/ a topic like this one (females here) shouldnt be without a hook or be longer. IMO, a song about females is a topical, and i dont like when those do not come equipped with a hook and at least second verse. But good job!

PS....u did this on christmas???? Come on, cheer up! Its the holidays! nah, jus playin, i got dumped day after christmas so wasnt nothin special for me neither, but...good drop!

^^damn man i can feel that

but yeah just this girl fucked me over

we were together for about 6 months and she cheated on me and i stayed faithful
oh well it happens to the best of us right?

well hit me up with a link and i'll leave some fee

i gotta say ive peeped a tracl or two of yours and evry so often ya flow catches my ear improvement wise ur elevatin mos def ya riding the beats alot better these days and i agree if u did this on christmas cheer the fuck up lol

this is hardly a freestyle...but it sounds good


like the sound of the vocals...mixed well

beat is nice

short n sweet


like my meat





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