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12-25-06, 05:18 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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freestyle shizzim
IP: A644 4EFD
lol word up just a freestyle i did this morning about this girl
word up check it out http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4814633 ======= LINKS ++++++ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238386 +++++++++++++++++++ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238298 |
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12-25-06, 07:46 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: A644 4EFD
scratch this
close this up  |
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12-26-06, 03:09 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: A644 4EFD
lol nah never lets just see some feed
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12-27-06, 10:56 AM
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New to RV
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IP: 685C 0602
i liked this, the beat was nice, and nothin wrong w/ addressin the ladies track every once in awhile, i understand it was a "freestyle" but still was a little short. Lyricly it was good, got the messege across, but was nothing lyricly amazing. The emotion came across very well, it was easy to understand how it felt, and what emotions you were trying to get out. It was mixed very well, the quality was good, and your flow was decent as well. My only complaint is that songs w/ a topic like this one (females here) shouldnt be without a hook or be longer. IMO, a song about females is a topical, and i dont like when those do not come equipped with a hook and at least second verse. But good job!
PS....u did this on christmas???? Come on, cheer up! Its the holidays! nah, jus playin, i got dumped day after christmas so wasnt nothin special for me neither, but...good drop! |
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12-27-06, 03:51 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: A644 4EFD
^^damn man i can feel that
but yeah just this girl fucked me over we were together for about 6 months and she cheated on me and i stayed faithful oh well it happens to the best of us right? well hit me up with a link and i'll leave some fee |
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12-27-06, 04:26 PM
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IP: 6BD7 BD9F
i gotta say ive peeped a tracl or two of yours and evry so often ya flow catches my ear improvement wise ur elevatin mos def ya riding the beats alot better these days and i agree if u did this on christmas cheer the fuck up lol
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01-04-07, 12:47 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 40C2 F668
this is hardly a freestyle...but it sounds good
like the sound of the vocals...mixed well beat is nice short n sweet like my meat 1 WAIT...nvm |
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