Freestyle (feedback) ?
 

Mabey my intenshions are good but some of tha shit i say i take it to heart
an rather die in my own blood , Ive gritted my teeth an held my head down like i never had somethin to say like i do now , is it tha way i wasnt razed
never knew i had a cousin who died for changing his ways....ya know
There use to be time when i was never confused bout how id listenin in to rhyme's like it had a history behind it in every line, there's always gonna be soilders on tha front line, rememmbre that cuz we choose tha path we walk or ya fall behind dont let yourself fall apart.....instead of pressin play you can push rewind start over agian an say whats on ya mind.


short piece but aint got time ta sit here all day an rhyme
give a little feed back this just a quick freestyle uppin for
feedback it will be returned CB83 :thefinger

use // at the end of your rhymes to make it easier to catch the flow other then that it was straight.