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B. Magik 11-26-04 05:21 PM

[rate]~Life's A Bitch~[rate]
 
This how I'm feeling right now...If you feel the same way, leave me some feed...thanx

..I'm tired-of-struggling, tired of always rhyming-and-hustling..
..I'm sick-of-life, and I think-its-time, for my eyes-to-be-shutting..
..I'm tired of caps-and-slugs, grab-and-runs, acting-tough..
..And I'm sick of the world, that made me resort back-to-drugs..
..I'm tired of slanging-bricks, chasing-kids, for their eighty-cents..
..Tired of not-being-stable, and not-being-able, to pay-the-rent..
..Sick-of-the-pain, tired of thunder, sick-of-the-rain..
..Sick-of-cocaine, tired of thinking this-is-a-game..
..Tired of slitting-my-veins, but the knife-isnt-help..
..Sick of hiding-from-belts, why must I live my life-in-this-hell?..
..Tired-of-family, tired of friends not being there-for-me..
..Bouncing around like trampolines, and working at Dairy-Queen..
..I'm sick-of-women, and sick of having to play tricks-to-get-em..
..I'm sick of these trick-friendships, and girls who wont quit-bitchin..
..I'm tired-of-stress, tried-my-best, but life-is-a-mess..
..Too bad I can't start all over, and try-it-again...

Lookin for maybe 2 cats to get on the remix to this...hit me up if u interested...SERIOUS RESPONSES ONLY!!! IF YOU'RE NOT GONNA DO IT, DONT WASTE MY TIME!!!! anywayz...leave me some feed on this...I will return the favor...Thanx...1

B. Magik 11-26-04 05:41 PM

yo...someone gonna leave me some feed or what?? Jesus...come on yall...uppin this bitch

B. Magik 11-26-04 06:35 PM

uppin this fucker!!

PayDay 11-26-04 06:44 PM

yo man...that is some dope shit...nice flow, word play, and structure was good...8/10...keep that shit comin

B. Magik 11-26-04 06:55 PM

no doubt dawg...thanx for the feed...uppin for more...1

Critic 11-26-04 07:12 PM

Yeah man nice verse a lot of emotion and some decent
wordplay could have uped the vocab...

How can a 14 year old relate to all this ? Is this real or just
a topical drop.

B. Magik 11-28-04 11:11 AM

alot of this is real man...I threw in a few lines for a topical...but alot of it is real

B. Magik 11-28-04 11:12 AM

by the way, thanx for the feed...uppin this bitch!

mindlessrapper 11-28-04 11:30 AM

ay Black~Magik that was hella tight 7/10 the word play was good and thats just tight cuz tha words are so true, really good word play

B. Magik 11-28-04 11:32 AM

thanx man...glad u felt it...uppin for more feed...come on yall quit sleepin on this fuckin thing!! 1

PntBlnkDistnce 11-28-04 11:48 AM

thats some ill shyt man nice flows and topic 8/10 keep em comin bro im new to this shyt but hit me with some feed mang
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162583

B. Magik 11-28-04 11:56 AM

aight I'll hit it up...thanx for the feed man...uppin this fucker!!!!!!!

intensify effect 11-28-04 12:40 PM

yo this was fire mang...
multis was good,
flow was good,
all around shit was just TIGHT mang.....

9.0 outta 10.....

fire...

B. Magik 11-28-04 12:53 PM

wow...thanx dawg...glad yall like it...uppin...1

teknikal vuez 11-28-04 12:55 PM

Yea This Shit Was On Point.. On The Real.. Good Job ON This..
nothin you gotta work on either..



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