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Ebircs 08-31-06 12:10 AM

ok..all honesty...ask if me ur........
 
better then....or any good..............


im handing real feedback here........rite now..........

i'm pretty drunk and might not do it later but....hey....it's ion for now

lol

KOOL COL-B 08-31-06 12:21 AM

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old shit wif a SHITTY headset mic. werd

Ebircs 08-31-06 12:27 AM

ppfft..colby.b4 even listning to ur shit...i know ur iller then me and anyone else on this site...no lie.....u rock


ok..while listning..............


u sound way oldschool........u sould a bit unfomfortable on the mic.........quality is decent......the reverb is ehhh...i'd tone it down.....lyrics is oldschool..........not my style but iight.............voice ok nice.....flow is their..but like i said it's old school...................turn off the effects........flow is basic..idk, ur going for old school and thats cool but like.....only white kids going @ that now adays .....so u gona b solo...lol...........but it's deff not bad, u jus got ur own lil style i guess....


my advice to you......get on a new style....and drop ur effects....


PS....ur still the illest on this site.......

JTR 08-31-06 12:40 AM

Is my dick better then you?

Ebircs 08-31-06 12:54 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Jack
Is my dick better then you?



not sure,,,,,


most likely not tho...from wut ur girl tells me...

Ebircs 08-31-06 01:01 AM

listning to metaphoricaly speaking..........since im on all the other ones..........


ok..........you style is nice man.......i like it a lot.....kinda IT and kila priest wrapped up in one....ur voice is sick man.......and ur presence fits ur voice........all i can tell u is flow smoother....dont put so many words in ur bars............lyrics..mostly nice....once in a while u spit a lame punch......but topic wise...ur sick....work on punches...BTW tghe concept of this song is bananas..........love it man.........w a little work u will deff shine, ur nice bro....no doubt......jus get a bit grimier......or not...thats opinion....

[.:D:.] 08-31-06 02:07 AM

damn...u gotta get drunk to be honest?

Blay'all 08-31-06 02:10 AM

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Ebircs 08-31-06 02:16 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by [.:D:.]
damn...u gotta get drunk to be honest?


no.....i gota b drunk to get on RV u cock smoker...........

Ebircs 08-31-06 02:22 AM

blay...........


to be honest.....the south shits not my thing..........

but......hook sound way professional..........verse comes in real nice, blends well.........thing i dont see as in most southern rap...is musical content.....but thats kinda opinion....flows smooth....voice fits....in parts u sound a bit monotone....maybe up ur delevery a touch....hooks nice...i dont like paul wall...but if he's rich i dont see why ur not....honestly....but this is your basic dirty south track .....nice beat....shit talkin ...nice flow....not something im into but...hey thats southern rap....and u pull it off pretty well IMO....only thing i'd say is get a bit more comfortable on the mic........and if u wana reach a farther croud........get some metaS and shit that will reach pplz...

1ne

KOOL COL-B 08-31-06 02:41 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ebircs
ppfft..colby.b4 even listning to ur shit...i know ur iller then me and anyone else on this site...no lie.....u rock


ok..while listning..............


u sound way oldschool........u sould a bit unfomfortable on the mic.........quality is decent......the reverb is ehhh...i'd tone it down.....lyrics is oldschool..........not my style but iight.............voice ok nice.....flow is their..but like i said it's old school...................turn off the effects........flow is basic..idk, ur going for old school and thats cool but like.....only white kids going @ that now adays .....so u gona b solo...lol...........but it's deff not bad, u jus got ur own lil style i guess....


my advice to you......get on a new style....and drop ur effects....


PS....ur still the illest on this site.......


lol, werd, thanx spucca. yeah, im old skool, like 95% of wut i listen 2 iz old skool, lol, so u know. thanx fo tha feed :love: werd

Ebircs 08-31-06 02:53 AM

no doubt bro.......ur chilli chill in my book...and ur "werd" cracks me and my boy up every time we see it

Ysdat 08-31-06 03:22 AM

o0o0o0oo pick me pick me [/little kid voice]

http://www.myspace.com/7thendproductions

leady 09-01-06 10:27 AM

honestly i dont need you to tell me im dope... i allready know i am.


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