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taking over the throne ( thoughts on dis )
i bring more to your acts than a sword and a axe//
As a matter of fact, i got kings and lords applauding my tracks// Batter the wack, in manner i act im like ..... On a withdrawal from crack// Dis aint a fair match, fuck maid Maryann im gettin oral from yatts// Riding bare back on horses,to dispatch anyone in line of attack// Dominating the fights im known as the honourable~knight // I hold a sword and a mic to onslaught your venerable~might // Slit ya vocal cords wit a knife, fuck~all~off~the~hype// Promised its tight ill ripp~ya~lipps and stitch~the~slits jus to show you the most appalling~of~sights// Commanding armies in battles over succession// Privileges of kings in my line~of~descendants// When its time~for~comendants I force villages to die~from oppressions// Connive a lie like politicians similar to a knight the way I size up the oppositions// Clear my vision fulfilling merlins prophecy // Im settled on the round table cut from Mahogany// Trapped in a cacophony of conflict; the start~of~a~chronicle// Im the oricle, White knights an dragons this shit aint draft~or~mytholical // The vulnerable expire like a plant when it wittles// The unwell and brittle, I make der cells sickle// Conceal like a roses prickle, in a cipher you cant match my calibre// I yield the stamina, the chosen one I detach Excalibur// My cells emit poisonous seeds to inrelshish sick// You could take over the throne even if you inherit it// Chorus---------------_________-----------____________---- i take the sword from the stone knights in rhyming armour// Taking over the throne the starting of a sarger // You forcefully thrown,"Battling me!"? look what got in you?// Running camalot manz, are running shouck, i beg u dont continue//x2 Im above ya rapping ,il have U hung n stoned wit rocks// Love and passion like guinervere and lancelot// The priministers plot is similar to that of king arthur in camelot// Boycott the army into believing his plan is locked// Can it stop, im shocked that even now people go hungry// In world of monarchs and hierarchys innocent starve and the guilty ones freed// Black knights and dark lords similar to neo nazi// We still live in the dark, hopes ever to make blind see// The black plague nah days is known as AIDs and HIV// Pulling the "sword from the stone" *// Is like bush n blair thinking dey can succeed in the war terrorism alone*// i attend sword battles when knifes contend// Time again, Satan tries to take me as my life descends// Merlin is comparable to cocaine controlling minds of men// i recommend ,you stay away from-me ,I do wrong-deeds like ogres~n~giants// But that depends on-me, I act strongly scoldering~tyrants// Body left stilled and torn Cavilery killed from wars // Watching over my kingdom from hills n moors// Im chilled from thoughts of bodies left ill and torn // Ya metaphors amount to naught your unskilled n scrawn// (scrawny) Willing to wage war, prepared blud, I carry swords// I ave fought against scorching flames from dragons roars// Travel before the four horsemen// Take over the throne, killing more "youts" than "abortions"// Chorus---------------_________-----------____________---- i take the sword from the stone knights in rhyming armour// Taking over the throne the starting of a sarger // You forcefully thrown," Battling me!"? Look what got in you?// Running Camelot manz, are running shouck, i beg u dont continue// |
any thoughts one dis , how i could improve it or if i need 2 make it flow better
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nice, u had about 10 ill multies in there, but i think it could have done with about 8 or 10 less lines and just compacted the good shit in there. None the less it was tite. Good opener, good finished, best stuff from a newb i seen in a long time.
Peep the open mic in my sig....... |
sup blud , im from east london bruv
whats gaing on like that was tight man piece yeah anyways u should look at some of my open mics |
the drop was tight, nice vocab n multies
check mine out http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66848 |
that eas long but it was still pretty good
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