i bring more to your acts than a sword and a axe//
As a matter of fact, i got kings and lords applauding my tracks//
Batter the wack, in manner i act im like ..... On a withdrawal from crack//
Dis aint a fair match, fuck maid Maryann im gettin oral from yatts//
Riding bare back on horses,to dispatch anyone in line of attack//
Dominating the fights im known as the honourable~knight //
I hold a sword and a mic to onslaught your venerable~might //
Slit ya vocal cords wit a knife, fuck~all~off~the~hype//
Promised its tight ill ripp~ya~lipps and stitch~the~slits jus to show you the most appalling~of~sights//
Commanding armies in battles over succession//
Privileges of kings in my line~of~descendants//
When its time~for~comendants I force villages to die~from oppressions//
Connive a lie like politicians similar to a knight the way I size up the oppositions//
Clear my vision fulfilling merlins prophecy //
Im settled on the round table cut from Mahogany//
Trapped in a cacophony of conflict; the start~of~a~chronicle//
Im the oricle, White knights an dragons this shit aint draft~or~mytholical //
The vulnerable expire like a plant when it wittles//
The unwell and brittle, I make der cells sickle//
Conceal like a roses prickle, in a cipher you cant match my calibre//
I yield the stamina, the chosen one I detach Excalibur//
My cells emit poisonous seeds to inrelshish sick//
You could take over the throne even if you inherit it//

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i take the sword from the stone knights in rhyming armour//
Taking over the throne the starting of a sarger //
You forcefully thrown,"Battling me!"? look what got in you?//
Running camalot manz, are running shouck, i beg u dont continue//x2

Im above ya rapping ,il have U hung n stoned wit rocks//
Love and passion like guinervere and lancelot//
The priministers plot is similar to that of king arthur in camelot//
Boycott the army into believing his plan is locked//
Can it stop, im shocked that even now people go hungry//
In world of monarchs and hierarchys innocent starve and the guilty ones freed//
Black knights and dark lords similar to neo nazi//
We still live in the dark, hopes ever to make blind see//
The black plague nah days is known as AIDs and HIV//
Pulling the "sword from the stone" *//
Is like bush n blair thinking dey can succeed in the war terrorism alone*//
i attend sword battles when knifes contend//
Time again, Satan tries to take me as my life descends//
Merlin is comparable to cocaine controlling minds of men//
i recommend ,you stay away from-me ,I do wrong-deeds like ogres~n~giants//
But that depends on-me, I act strongly scoldering~tyrants//
Body left stilled and torn Cavilery killed from wars //
Watching over my kingdom from hills n moors//
Im chilled from thoughts of bodies left ill and torn //
Ya metaphors amount to naught your unskilled n scrawn// (scrawny)
Willing to wage war, prepared blud, I carry swords//
I ave fought against scorching flames from dragons roars//
Travel before the four horsemen//
Take over the throne, killing more "youts" than "abortions"//


Chorus---------------_________-----------____________----
i take the sword from the stone knights in rhyming armour//
Taking over the throne the starting of a sarger //
You forcefully thrown," Battling me!"? Look what got in you?//
Running Camelot manz, are running shouck, i beg u dont continue//

any thoughts one dis , how i could improve it or if i need 2 make it flow better

uppin

nice, u had about 10 ill multies in there, but i think it could have done with about 8 or 10 less lines and just compacted the good shit in there. None the less it was tite. Good opener, good finished, best stuff from a newb i seen in a long time.

Peep the open mic in my sig.......

sup blud , im from east london bruv
whats gaing on like
that was tight man
piece yeah
anyways u should look at some of my open mics

the drop was tight, nice vocab n multies

check mine out
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66848

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