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Narc-Uzi & -UNF- Presents Step Into My Life.
Intro:ayo You Dont Know What Its Like To Be Me,well Let Us Show You Aight.....Narc?ya Ready? Narc -uzi:yuh We Gon Get Shit Started Up Aight? -UNF-:yeh Lets Go Verse 1(-UNF-): Aight......My Mind Shatters, And Seems That These Phases Hit Me Steadily And Bear Down On Me Heavily, No Chance On Us At Another Level, See Cuz Ya Picture Still Seems To Rip Holes In My Heart And Im Sure Its A Sign But The Longer WIthout You Get it Gets The Thought Of Suicide Floats Inside My Mind Cuz Those Holes Remain Gashin N Shit And What Rests On My Head Is The Mac And Its Clip Covered In Puerto Rican Vodka 2 Nights Ago I Was On The Verge Of Slashin My Wrists And Still I Think About It, Back When I Was Drunk And My Life Stayed ON The Tip Of A Knife And My Babies Smilin Face Was The Turnin Factor On Ending My Life My Mind Cant Rest Easy, I Gotta Ask Myself Why Is It Im Debatin,-Im Thru I See The Fire In Your Eyes And Girl Believe Me, Theres Satan In You...... Hook x2: Step In To My Life
Where Regadless of Day and Night thers always Darkness Step Into My Life When an Emotional Artist becomes Stubborn and Heartless Step Into My LIfe Where its a Promise That in your dreams you'll be Haunted Step Into My Life Were you need to be Cautious and live the Live of a Convict Verse 2(Narc-Uzi): My Eyes are Disquised By the Ghetto Suprised So I Begin to Realize That Im a Rebel
My whole life Ive been Advised to Settle On this Level These lies are fedding the Devil I was trying to be The Baddest so now My status is that the Casket is my new Mattres My Palace Is not in the Atlas Its full of Cactus in Hells Asparatus Where Life is Drastic My horror you cant Match It The Vision dont look well like it was drawn by a bad Artist Thoughts to Cut my Wrist cuz i feel prisoned pumping my Fist wishing that i dont Exist Imagine this being your Reality You will Rapidly kill your self or Comfirm your Insanity Ill be Happily to trade my life for urs Go ahed Step Into My Life ill even open the Doors |
posted feed here aight yall upping................http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206108
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hey whattup nice song man :thumbup: UNF ur verse was dope man, the Uzi no criticism dude, just that the lyrical content was nice just i felt the bars were a lil long if ur gna record it, if ur a fast rapper then :laugh2: nbut if not u might need to make them shorter but gd job :thumbup: :thumbup:
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The lines are streched but i use alot of multis |
i felt narc's verse betta than mine ....:(
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ummm....bump...................................
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lines are too long, not bad, 6/10 [/feedreturned]
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upping..................................
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upp checking..............
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upping..........dont fuckin sleep bitches -_-.........
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Fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!upping.......................
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I liked this peice
UNF:your verse i like alot your structure was off juss by a lil bit....and i mean alil bit Narc: Your verse was a lil strecthed but it sill kinda flowed nicely.....but anywhos' this was a good drop i liked the hook ya'll should collab again.. and this would make a dope audio song by the way :thumbup: |
Both had good verses....i was feelin nar-uzi's much more only becuz his multis made his very enjoyable to read as for unf was good, good imagery and a strong piece overall.....hook was tight also 7.5/10
rtf in my sig links :thumbup: |
i liked diz piece here it was str8 gutta fa sho -UNF- i really luved ur verse it was hot on tha real vocab, structure, meta's, concept & originality was on point 9.5/10
Narc u alwayz come thru reppin on ya verses also but a lil stretched cuz of tha multi'z i feel ya but it was good, vocab was hittin, structure was ight, multi'z r tight, concept & originality was hot also 8.5/10 |
Still uppin all favors returned
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