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29. Spektikul vs 30. GreatnesS
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Checking in..............................
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checkin................
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..Bitch cant make the decision...to battle his opponents assigned.. ..He puts lipstick on his forehead...just to help him make up his mind.. |
im sure jin sed the second line of that in one of his battles.................... agenst sum guy called Amar or sumthin
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but it was used in a different way........................
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ya act like it ain't no thing, keep laughing queen
so poor, ya articles of clothing... literally come out a magazine |
oh yeah i ment to drop sooner but this whole week hasn't been to good
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2560982 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215710 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2560986 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2560989 |
Ok,I gotta give it to greatness.Though his queen/magazine rhyming was forced,and his punch was a lil' weak in the wording side....it was still creative.While,on the other hand,spek's shit is played out.I must have heard a make up line like that a million times by now.
Vote-greatness.... |
v/ spek
i laughed at his punch.. but if it WAS bitten.. he doesnt deserve the win |
^Fuck biting...
...I dont even know who Jin is. I know hes a rapper...but fuck listening to him. Ps. I dont download rap battles......................... And I havent seen a make-up line before, whatever. VOTE. |
I've seen the concept that Spek has used before, so you lost some points on creativity. But greatness' punch was just kind of blah. The punch itself was kinda bad, but you were more creative. Both of you need to use personals. Spek's was a harder punch.
v-Spek |
^ I dont use personals on unknown kats. :(
...because its DUMB. lol. |
Use wordplay idiot!
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