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(Stanza) vs King Solo
Battle Rules:
10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 KO :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-10-05 at 12:30 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
(Stanza) has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 11:36 AM.
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Yo You Wont Get Ahead In This battle Like A one sided quater The Spit Off my Lips is The only Time Solos ever seen water You Cant Even beat R-Rated With your PG-13 Disney Rymes Put a Whole In Yo Pocket so You Think you Was Droppin Dimes Enough With the Personal Stuff I Already Know What You Got On me You Gonna say I Was Biting But Ppl Can See The Marks from Yo Teeth? Only an Hour To Drop and Im Spitting and You aint Even Checked In Bcuz Your Trying To Get Yo 5 dickriders In a Room for 3 At Holiday Inn Killin is Never Going Down In Yo Part Of The Town So Dont Act Shell Bcuz The only Time you Will Spit Fire Is When You Die and Go To Hell Done :thumbup: |
King Solo has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 11:59 AM.
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Like a fat kid on a bench ya wack ass got RV downward sloping..
Talk about we thought you were gone…nah, we were just hoping.. Its true, ya hold skillz in the palm of ya hand, but then on the other hand.. Ya really a fake…seriously, have you ever heard of a rapper band.. (banned) Stanza, my age surpasses you so it’s a fact you could never ‘son-me’.. Ya herb, cut it down to initials but we still know ya From: N.ewb C.ountry.. S.it and T.ake A N.ap, catch some Z.’s..ya A.ss can't play tha game.. ^^ And as that line proves it, ya get merked just by spellin ya name.. Wanna give up, cuz like ‘solid encryptions’ ya ass can’t ‘hack it’… Even stanza isn’t sure about himself………………………………. ………………………..that’s why he supports his title with brackets.. *don't get it don't vote..... |
Damn This Is Gonna be close Really LOL
What do You Think ?..... |
maybe......maybe not
i am confident cuz of my personals in every bar.... |
Voted For: King Solo
ok solo this was a dope verse...... punches were on point flow was dope very easy to read vocab was good and your personals hit perfectly wasnt at all strected or tha lines werent forced which took this one easily for you stanza....ight verse but punches didnt flow together so that made tha flow off vocab was ight punches also didnt hit directly like solos sum good concepts there thou very simple to like in and inn overall this couldve been much better ive seen way better stanza stay up famz but vote=solo |
We Shouldnt keep That Vote now should we ?
King Solo I Thinkk You Should be man Enough to say that even you know that wasnt explained |
Voted For: King Solo
STANZA You Wont Get Ahead In This battle Like A one sided quater The Spit Off my Lips is The only Time Solos ever seen water ^^DECENT OPENER You Cant Even beat R-Rated With your PG-13 Disney Rymes Put a Whole In Yo Pocket so You Think you Was Droppin Dimes ^^^MMMMMMMMMMM..................NO Enough With the Personal Stuff I Already Know What You Got On me You Gonna say I Was Biting But Ppl Can See The Marks from Yo Teeth? ^^^^O.K Only an Hour To Drop and Im Spitting and You aint Even Checked In Bcuz Your Trying To Get Yo 5 dickriders In a Room for 3 At Holiday Inn ^^^MEH Killin is Never Going Down In Yo Part Of The Town So Dont Act Shell Bcuz The only Time you Will Spit Fire Is When You Die and Go To Hell ^^^WEAK CLOSURE STANZA- YA VERSE WUZ PRETTY WEAK I WUZNT REALLY FEELIN NUFFIN. DA BEST PART OF YA VERSE I THINK WUZ DA OPENER, LOL. B SIDES DAT U CAME PRETTY WEAK U NEED TA IMPROVE ALL YO PUNCHES N PERSONALS. YA STRUCTURE WUZ STR8 DOE. JUS KEEP ELEVATIN N U B IIGHT. KING SOLO Like a fat kid on a bench ya wack ass got RV downward sloping.. Talk about we thought you were gone…nah, we were just hoping.. ^^^LOL GOOD OPENER Its true, ya hold skillz in the palm of ya hand, but then on the other hand.. Ya really a fake…seriously, have you ever heard of a rapper band.. (banned) ^^^NICE PUNCH HIT PRETTY HARD Stanza, my age surpasses you so it’s a fact you could never ‘son-me’.. Ya herb, cut it down to initials but we still know ya From: N.ewb C.ountry.. ^^^HOTTEST LINE OF DA BATTLE GREAT PUNCH S.it and T.ake A N.ap, catch some Z.’s..ya A.ss can't play tha game.. ^^ And as that line proves it, ya get merked just by spellin ya name.. ^^^ANOTHA HOTT ASS PUNCH MAYNE Wanna give up, cuz like ‘solid encryptions’ ya ass can’t ‘hack it’… Even stanza isn’t sure about himself………………………………. ………………………..that’s why he supports his title with brackets.. ^^^DAYUM GOOD KING SOLO- DAYUUMMMMMM, DO I EVEN NEED TA SAY N E THING. ITS A 1 SIDED BATTLE. SOLO YO SHIT WUZ FIRE. I MEAN DA PUNCHES WUZ HITTIN THROUGHOUT DA WHOLE BATTLE N PERSONALS WERE USED TA A GREAT EXTENT. MAYNE YO SHIT WUZ DAMN NEAR FLAWLESS (9.5/10) Mah v/ K.Solo for many reasons LYRICALMA$TAMIND out nigga ~1~ WUN |
naw fuck dat stanza
i dont want these votes always getting removed thats why battles dont get closed its got enough explanation for me........ he commented on the flow, vocabs, personals, both us using good concepts and the basic rhyming in parts you did rhyming in and inn together so enough explanation for me.... don't be a bitch and get it removed.... |
Voted For: King Solo
You Wont Get Ahead In This battle Like A one sided quater The Spit Off my Lips is The only Time Solos ever seen water ^not understanding how da water thing izza diss? You Cant Even beat R-Rated With your PG-13 Disney Rymes Put a Whole In Yo Pocket so You Think you Was Droppin Dimes ^1st line wuz weak 2nd wuz ok Enough With the Personal Stuff I Already Know What You Got On me You Gonna say I Was Biting But Ppl Can See The Marks from Yo Teeth? ^dat wuz nyce Only an Hour To Drop and Im Spitting and You aint Even Checked In Bcuz Your Trying To Get Yo 5 dickriders In a Room for 3 At Holiday Inn ^nyce concept, horribly worded 4 real Killin is Never Going Down In Yo Part Of The Town So Dont Act Shell Bcuz The only Time you Will Spit Fire Is When You Die and Go To Hell ^very weak wordplay wuz 2 basic, nuthin original or nuthin dat caught my attention & wanted 2 read again, try being more creative Like a fat kid on a bench ya wack ass got RV downward sloping.. Talk about we thought you were gone…nah, we were just hoping.. ^decent wordplay, real nyce pun in da second line Its true, ya hold skillz in the palm of ya hand, but then on the other hand.. Ya really a fake…seriously, have you ever heard of a rapper band.. (banned) ^weakest bar in yo verse Stanza, my age surpasses you so it’s a fact you could never ‘son-me’.. Ya herb, cut it down to initials but we still know ya From: N.ewb C.ountry.. ^nuthin special but it wuz a better concept than most ov stanzas flow S.it and T.ake A N.ap, catch some Z.’s..ya A.ss can't play tha game.. ^^ And as that line proves it, ya get merked just by spellin ya name.. ^highlight ov da battle, really creative concept & wordplay Wanna give up, cuz like ‘solid encryptions’ ya ass can’t ‘hack it’… Even stanza isn’t sure about himself………………………………. ………………………..that’s why he supports his title with brackets.. ^ good first line, da personal in da 2nd wuz weak U had da much better verse, wordplay wuz more complex & creative then stanza & yo punz hit alot harder, nuthin 2 personal dat made him look lyke a fool, but u styll got diz EZ.. vote=king solo-much more creative wordplay & da punchlines were more complex & harder hitting...plz rtf |
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