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Ok heres my piece, completely raw and uninhibited:::::here goes

Untitled, i live life not understanding the difference between life and pain,...
Accept on the outside where the colors have all changed,...
Everything must circle around itself again,....
I wish i could remember those times, but i have foregotten,..
Where my path will lead, the answers are out there untouched and pristine,..
They lie in the faces of every living thing i've seen,...
Like clues to a puzzle that is never ending,...
But still i can begin to believe in whirlwinds,...
Since i am awoken by the same humming that has been happening forever,..
Free flowing thought is eternal consciousness in Knowing,.......


Ok..let me know what u think peeps.....

damn that had alot of felling going toward the piece...nice shyt man...

not a man, but thanks, appreciate it!!!

uppin...for more thoughts,replies

have to agree with mag... short sweet... lots of images captured in a little space... nice job.

thanks both...

nice shit keep it up

That was hot...i mean it had much feeling behind..tha words..i can relate to it.n a strange way, if u dont mind heres my interpretation of it...u go thru so much shit dat u wonder is life really like this, where is tha happiness,ppl dont change just they fcaes,b/c n all reality they really playin u ...and wat u do depends on them, b/c sum individuals can be big balls of fuckin negative energy...lmao so u neva know my friend, so it is a puzzle...b/c when u think u got a piece thats just right fo that particular spot...it doesnt fit right cuz when u turn it its all messed up

nice girl.. put me in deep thought.. im really feelin this drop.. i wanan see more from you

damn that's really deep keep on writing stuff like that

that's hot way to go

thanks.......damn