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06-30-04, 08:12 PM
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TITLE: untitled
IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Ok heres my piece, completely raw and uninhibited:::::here goes
Untitled, i live life not understanding the difference between life and pain,... Accept on the outside where the colors have all changed,... Everything must circle around itself again,.... I wish i could remember those times, but i have foregotten,.. Where my path will lead, the answers are out there untouched and pristine,.. They lie in the faces of every living thing i've seen,... Like clues to a puzzle that is never ending,... But still i can begin to believe in whirlwinds,... Since i am awoken by the same humming that has been happening forever,.. Free flowing thought is eternal consciousness in Knowing,....... Ok..let me know what u think peeps.....
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06-30-04, 08:30 PM
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Jumpin' Along
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IP: C56C 93CC
damn that had alot of felling going toward the piece...nice shyt man...
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06-30-04, 08:42 PM
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
not a man, but thanks, appreciate it!!!
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06-30-04, 11:00 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
uppin...for more thoughts,replies
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07-01-04, 03:22 AM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
have to agree with mag... short sweet... lots of images captured in a little space... nice job.
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07-03-04, 02:11 AM
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IP: 4779 5259
thanks both...
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07-03-04, 10:19 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2E43 6BFE
nice shit keep it up
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07-03-04, 01:46 PM
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IP: 6F6B 191C
That was hot...i mean it had much feeling behind..tha words..i can relate to it.n a strange way, if u dont mind heres my interpretation of it...u go thru so much shit dat u wonder is life really like this, where is tha happiness,ppl dont change just they fcaes,b/c n all reality they really playin u ...and wat u do depends on them, b/c sum individuals can be big balls of fuckin negative energy...lmao so u neva know my friend, so it is a puzzle...b/c when u think u got a piece thats just right fo that particular spot...it doesnt fit right cuz when u turn it its all messed up
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07-09-04, 06:17 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 7FB4 72E4
nice girl.. put me in deep thought.. im really feelin this drop.. i wanan see more from you
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07-10-04, 04:37 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
damn that's really deep keep on writing stuff like that
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07-16-04, 04:43 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: EC0B 84C7
that's hot way to go
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07-16-04, 02:35 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
thanks.......damn
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