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J DOT vs Lyrical Havok
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-29-04 at 04:55 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
LyriCal HavoK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:15 PM.
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J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:15 PM.
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aight...check it
he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1 shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2 compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3 claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4 im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5 your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6 um...no hate on M.J just used what people claim...innocent until proven guilty... |
Even if you made the biggest loogy, you still couldnt spit
Your wack lines are limited…like cell phone minutes you'll get cut off in a instant, you’re a Lyrical “Chaos" 5-0 means I owned you, just call me boss I’ll turn you into my slave, like the roots of ya kins Even with yo copied lines, you couldnt a win Don’t make me expose you to these folks, I had second thoughts I got connects on RV, I’ll watch yo little ass rot -i got things to do...6 lines, round 2 after you spit |
upnnnnnnnnnn thissssss shittttttttttttt
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uppin 4 votes...
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Voted For: J DOT
You get this one cause your punches were abit harder. It seems like the other guy keep repeating himself wit da words he used to rhyme wit. His punches were ok too. Your structure wasn't all that and could have been better but you get this one. Return da favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147476 |
aiyo...uppn this...good lookn...i was thinkn that too...he kept repeating hissself...uppn, need more votes
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Voted For: LyriCal HavoK
I was feelin J Dot's but LH's flow got my attention, the closer was ill Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: J DOT
i wasnt feeling lyrical havoks flow...he had too many repeated flows, and too many nursery rhymes. j dot didnt come as hard as some verses i seen him create, but he had like 2 or three ill punchlines...this battle didnt have too many personals... lyrical havok- work on your structure and your rhyming, j dot got you on that, other than that, you probably wouldve took this one...my vote goes to j dot, good battle |
big woody d/r votes gunna get dq'd tomorrow...how unexplained...aiyo...gotta up this
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still no votes....uppn this battle....
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Voted For: J DOT
Vote J dot Harder hitting punches and better use of wordplay.... Even if you made the biggest loogy, you still couldnt spit Your wack lines are limited…like cell phone minutes Could have hit harder if worded different you'll get cut off in a instant, you’re a Lyrical “Chaos" 5-0 means I owned you, just call me boss This was good I’ll turn you into my slave, like the roots of ya kins Even with yo copied lines, you couldnt a win Descent Don’t make me expose you to these folks, I had second thoughts I got connects on RV, I’ll watch yo little ass rot Good L havok too strecthed and played punhces, i though you would have come harder but i guess not..... he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1 shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2 This started off dumb and ended ok compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3 claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4 didnt like that how you used outta sight like that 2 times im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5 your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6 this was wack and plain ole stupid..... probably lost the battle for you Be more creative both of you he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1 shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2 compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3 claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4 im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5 your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6 Vote J DOt hit this up will ya http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=152973 |
where da votes at folks...
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