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from behind the BARS part 1 f/ Taz
this is part I of a III part series..
so look out for part II and III Sick im confined for a chryme i didnt commit ya i shot the bitch... but i didnt touch her shit so now i got rape... seven to life in this peice no chance of parol... no chance of release Taz i hear ya story man... now listen to mine in gym class i pulled the nine now im confined i need to catch a grasp to make my life last i need an escape plan before my lifes past Sick we need to... get with the bloods get with the crips we need to start movin drugs... start stacking chips get with the essays... tell them of the profit theyll confront the blacks... tell em to get off it Taz the key to this plan... is to not get caught remember what u were taught no trust can be bought the aryans are our allies but trust them not before the riot stops... well meet up at the spot Sick time to inform the southsiders... of the snow thats movin with the essays right under they nose i see six single southsiders move across the yard i see six single southsiders ready to meet god Taz the aryans see them niggers fighting for there lives so they jump in the riot making sure they dont survive the riots taken place so.... we be making haste we meet up in the mess hall and dissapear without a trace to be continued ....... ALL HONEST .. IN DEPTH FEEDBACK WILL BE RETURNED also check out these OM's by myself and Taz im the future - Taz best ive written - Tha Sick One weve both posted feed on eachothers OM's so there legit |
uppin for feeeeeeed^^^please i will rtf
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same here.. you post for us.. you get 2 feedbacks in return :thumbup:
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uppin come on.... dont sleep on this its hot for real
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This was a pretty decent drop..it coulda been alot better..structure was okay..everthing was pretty good ...only thing that lacked was that your vocab and wordplay usuage was pretty simple..But it was overall a good drop..had good feeling and emotions in this drop ..Nice imagery...and overall a good well rounded drop...return the favor in one of my Om..Heaven vs Hell
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thanks for the feed bc... uppin for more
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It was iight could of been better I aint really like the structure but the flow was coo and so was the rhymes I'd give this a 6.5/10 keep elevatin yall!
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its was decent...structure was aight...flow was pretty good...keep progressin and shit...ill be waitin for the next 2 parts.....
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thanks for the feed yall.... keep it comin
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decent.....pretty good and pretty deep....keep doing wat u do niggaz....up ur vocab...but good emotion and imagery.....8/10.....dope.....
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thanks.. but im not a negro lol... uppin
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drop some fuckin feed yo lol
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uppin, feel free to leave feed
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i like da topic da drops altogetha good concept...overall vocab, multi'z, structure, originality & all was nice str8 fire from both of y'all i can relate 2 it myself ...keep writing
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feedback much appreciated please continue to give it!!
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