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08-01-05, 02:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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im the future
IP: 3240 794D
Cant think in this moment im trapped with a gasp deciphering this omen
Tragedies will make you live unhappily wen you lose money you will owe men Taking the wrong paths with a tilted hat liven on the streets gunnin down catz Im a prodigy god will take me last but what does that matter cuz live flys by fast Disrespectin is my weapon only hadda flash my nine tought you a quick lesson Switch up the nine pull out my wesson trade for an ak gutta keep you guessin Its you im testin Beantown im reppin dont worry baby aint no need for stressin Neva say neva anything can be done Flash out ya nine all that beef turns to none Smack up that bitch rock out to sum 41 im out this bitch peace man 1  First open mic feedback please Last edited by taz : 08-01-05 at 02:55 PM. |
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08-01-05, 03:15 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
uppin for feed people ^^^^
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08-01-05, 03:17 PM
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T&T
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IP: 3E7E 9BDA
Had an ight rhyme shceme....but seriously man....ya had boring content.
Poor structure too.Wording was terrible as well.You were all over the place. No hate...just my opinion.. |
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08-01-05, 04:12 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
coo coo i respect the opinion^^ more feedback plz people....
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08-01-05, 04:43 PM
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Do Re Mi
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IP: FB48 3F52
ya lines is too strectched out.. split em up a little.. other that its a good piece
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crhyme sindicate . . . . . |
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08-01-05, 10:01 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
still lookin for more feeddback paleeez
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08-01-05, 10:38 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 00A2 4ED0
Quote:
werd fix up the scuture other than that it was ok |
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08-01-05, 10:58 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
thanks peeps......still lookin for feedback......
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08-03-05, 08:53 PM
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#9
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
upiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn
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08-04-05, 03:13 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
uppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin
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08-04-05, 07:54 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
upping please lets go guys
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08-04-05, 08:00 PM
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BeAnToWN rEp
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IP: 28AD 5545
i wasn't really feelin this one...it was ight...im not sayin it was bad...structure was kinda jacked up...fix that...and it woulda been alot betta...
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08-04-05, 08:13 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
Thats bullshit feed man dont come in here just tryna get ur posts up.....if u gunna post feed make it real...not stupid ass shit like that.
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